2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Night Rain, has the proper formatting and finds the rtreasure in nature's blending of the dead arbor flags and the life-giving waters from above. Nice.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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This haiku, Night Rain, has the proper formatting and finds the rtreasure in nature's blending of the dead arbor flags and the life-giving waters from above. Nice.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
The artwork set the tone for this magical piece you have delivered, Gypsy. It looks like a fairytale couldn't be born here. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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The artwork set the tone for this magical piece you have delivered, Gypsy. It looks like a fairytale couldn't be born here. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem describes the scene beautifully with rich words that evoke almost a mysterious emotion. I'm not sure mysterious is the right word, but the best I can come up with right now. Again, this is perfection.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This poem describes the scene beautifully with rich words that evoke almost a mysterious emotion. I'm not sure mysterious is the right word, but the best I can come up with right now. Again, this is perfection.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh i like the thought of night rain being moon-drops - very cool imagistic word choices falling on autumn leaves - nice!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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ooh i like the thought of night rain being moon-drops - very cool imagistic word choices falling on autumn leaves - nice!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
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Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a well written Haiku poem
It reminds me of those times I have seen the moonlight change the appearance of things under its shine.
Nice one.
RJ
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This is a well written Haiku poem
It reminds me of those times I have seen the moonlight change the appearance of things under its shine.
Nice one.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another evocative post celebrating the refreshing rain mid the darkness as the moon illuminates the rich colours of those Autumn leaves. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Another evocative post celebrating the refreshing rain mid the darkness as the moon illuminates the rich colours of those Autumn leaves. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie 😊
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Comment from Katiemae1977
I'm such a fan of haiku.thst puts the satori first. It would have worked well either way. Love "moondrops"
Outstanding haiku Gypsy
Take care
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I'm such a fan of haiku.thst puts the satori first. It would have worked well either way. Love "moondrops"
Outstanding haiku Gypsy
Take care
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, katiemae, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I like the lovely idea of "moon drops" because it is drops of rain at night and each drop is glistening with the reflection of the moonlight. Great way to describe the scenery and sounds of a rainy autumn night.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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I like the lovely idea of "moon drops" because it is drops of rain at night and each drop is glistening with the reflection of the moonlight. Great way to describe the scenery and sounds of a rainy autumn night.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Marival 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was another spectacular poem. I loved the imagery in it. The autumn leaves with the moonlight highlighting them. Then the moodiness of the night. It read beautifully and made me think of fall. Really enjoyable. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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This was another spectacular poem. I loved the imagery in it. The autumn leaves with the moonlight highlighting them. Then the moodiness of the night. It read beautifully and made me think of fall. Really enjoyable. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen 😊
Gypsy hugs