2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from dovemarie
Hi gypsy, wonderful haiku about fall that is coming soon, and beautiful pictures depicting fall leaves. thank you for your information about the Eastern Box Turtle. So far I've only known about hibernating bears, thanks for describing this turtle's hibernation. Dove
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Hi gypsy, wonderful haiku about fall that is coming soon, and beautiful pictures depicting fall leaves. thank you for your information about the Eastern Box Turtle. So far I've only known about hibernating bears, thanks for describing this turtle's hibernation. Dove
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Dove
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Thanks for the note about the (Eastern) Boxed Turtle. Without it, your Haiku did not register with me initially.
Good coloring scheme paired with your artwork!
Mark
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Gypsy,
Thanks for the note about the (Eastern) Boxed Turtle. Without it, your Haiku did not register with me initially.
Good coloring scheme paired with your artwork!
Mark
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am looking forward to autumn. I love the crisp cool air, but especially love the beautiful rich colors of autumn. Your poem presented autumn perfectly. Thank you for making my day.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I am looking forward to autumn. I love the crisp cool air, but especially love the beautiful rich colors of autumn. Your poem presented autumn perfectly. Thank you for making my day.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, this one is absolutely fantastic! I also love the Author's Notes because I love the term "state of torpor." What a gorgeous Autumn day you depicted here with your unique and magical artwork. As always, the presentation is as beautiful as your word choice. xoxox
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Oh, this one is absolutely fantastic! I also love the Author's Notes because I love the term "state of torpor." What a gorgeous Autumn day you depicted here with your unique and magical artwork. As always, the presentation is as beautiful as your word choice. xoxox
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure! Xo
Comment from RJ Heritage
The connection of the turtle and Spring is evident in your allusions that is made between the two "agents" of nature. Very bright and beautifully illustrated Haiku.
Thanks for posting.RJ
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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The connection of the turtle and Spring is evident in your allusions that is made between the two "agents" of nature. Very bright and beautifully illustrated Haiku.
Thanks for posting.RJ
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I like the idea of "Spring waits with the turtle". I guess the turtle will know exactly when Spring will wake him up. It's so cool how some animals can hibernate and be restored in time for the new season!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I like the idea of "Spring waits with the turtle". I guess the turtle will know exactly when Spring will wake him up. It's so cool how some animals can hibernate and be restored in time for the new season!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister
MariVal 😊 ❤️😘
Comment from BOO ghost
Oh, turtles hibernate. I can feel the Fall lingering in the air. This is a majestic looking presentation! The picture matches the autumn words in fall foliage colors. Love this poem!
The author notes explains everything. Crisp Air! You did a marvelous job! Almost wish I was a poet. This is a beauty! Have a splendiferously day!
BOO!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Oh, turtles hibernate. I can feel the Fall lingering in the air. This is a majestic looking presentation! The picture matches the autumn words in fall foliage colors. Love this poem!
The author notes explains everything. Crisp Air! You did a marvelous job! Almost wish I was a poet. This is a beauty! Have a splendiferously day!
BOO!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It will be a long time before spring will visit us again and I feel sad about that as winter seems to be the longest season of all, a fine post, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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It will be a long time before spring will visit us again and I feel sad about that as winter seems to be the longest season of all, a fine post, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Dolly
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
for some reason i kept wanting to pause after the second line (instead of the third) -- could be just me, but thought i'd mention it...
still a great haiku
with cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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for some reason i kept wanting to pause after the second line (instead of the third) -- could be just me, but thought i'd mention it...
still a great haiku
with cool imagery
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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The satori is "catch-up " the juxtaposition is the turtle is slow.
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊