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Zebra

The law of the jungle is brutal

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Comment from jessizero
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This was graphic without having to employ the aid of a picture. Your poem was very effective. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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How heartbreaking! I know they say it's just nature doing what nature does, and in the wild, that's how the cycle goes, but it's still a tough pill to swallow.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
    It is so unfair, born only to die minutes later.

    The death rate is very high 1/2 the births within a year die.

    Being free has its downs.