Dances
a pictureless haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I see a picture in my mind of a dimly lit room where, while life goes on outside, a couple makes their own music inside. I'm not sure if that's what your vision was, but it stirred my thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I see a picture in my mind of a dimly lit room where, while life goes on outside, a couple makes their own music inside. I'm not sure if that's what your vision was, but it stirred my thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I like to write stories with leaving the reader thinking what comes next. I did that with this poem.
Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable counts right for the contest, and your subject matter seems spot on. You did a great job expressing your point without a picture. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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You got the syllable counts right for the contest, and your subject matter seems spot on. You did a great job expressing your point without a picture. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.