A Tapestry of Us
Depicts love as an intricate journey of joy and challenge.6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations Kara on your worthy win here and your poem is a joy to read. Your richly worded lines are filled with life's ups and downs and I enjoyed the journey, love Dolly x
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Congratulations Kara on your worthy win here and your poem is a joy to read. Your richly worded lines are filled with life's ups and downs and I enjoyed the journey, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Congratulations on your win. Certainly, well deserved. Love the image and wording which brings the reader into an embrace that is so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
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Congratulations on your win. Certainly, well deserved. Love the image and wording which brings the reader into an embrace that is so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from karenina
I do not have six stars to award, but congratulations on an impressive win!
This poem is extraordinarily well written. It could be beautifully used as wedding vows!
Karenina
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I do not have six stars to award, but congratulations on an impressive win!
This poem is extraordinarily well written. It could be beautifully used as wedding vows!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Contests
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
You have woven beautifully with your words a lovely tapestry of what love is all about. I very much enjoyed reading it and your presentation is very nice. May you have a blessed day and a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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You have woven beautifully with your words a lovely tapestry of what love is all about. I very much enjoyed reading it and your presentation is very nice. May you have a blessed day and a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully written poem. Your imagery is so rich. I especially loved the line "the threads of our days". For me I felt that you were showing us the closeness and distance in love. The sections about finding beauty in silence was wonderful. It's truly a beautiful poem that is so touching.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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What a beautifully written poem. Your imagery is so rich. I especially loved the line "the threads of our days". For me I felt that you were showing us the closeness and distance in love. The sections about finding beauty in silence was wonderful. It's truly a beautiful poem that is so touching.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much!