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Milky Way

A hairdresser reaches for the night sky.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! Absolutely love the imagery here... would have never thought of those swaths as trails of dandruff! :-) Thanx so much for sharing today and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Many thanks.
Comment from jessizero
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This mental image you've painted with your words is lovely. You also got the syllable counts right for the contest. Your descriptions were great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
    Thanks, J.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Milky Way, has the proper formatting and is fashioned here as the epidemy of the clean pressed suit covered with the dead scalp skin of the gods.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
    Yeah, right. Hoh, hoh.