Honeybees
Honeybees7 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written 369 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God graduate peace. Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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This is a beautifully written 369 poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God graduate peace. Patricia
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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My day just got better. Thank you 😊
Comment from ESOSTINE
This is a beautifully penned 3-6-9 poem, and a strong contender in the contest prompt. Bees are more of alchemists that have concocted a universal elixir. It seems bees only sting to defend themselves when feeling threatened, unfortunately, leading to their sudden death. Well done, Kahlani.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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This is a beautifully penned 3-6-9 poem, and a strong contender in the contest prompt. Bees are more of alchemists that have concocted a universal elixir. It seems bees only sting to defend themselves when feeling threatened, unfortunately, leading to their sudden death. Well done, Kahlani.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Yes, that's why I posed it as a question. Thank you for your kind words, Esostine.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What an amazing visual! This wonderful creature is virtually coming out of my screen. Love the imagery of the soldiers with stingers and, of course, yes, they're natural healers, transforming their nectar into gold. Your 3-6-9 verse excellently complies with the prompt. A strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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What an amazing visual! This wonderful creature is virtually coming out of my screen. Love the imagery of the soldiers with stingers and, of course, yes, they're natural healers, transforming their nectar into gold. Your 3-6-9 verse excellently complies with the prompt. A strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your beautiful words ❤️
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah this is such a lovely poem about the wonderful bees. We have had such an issue in Ireland with numbers dwindling which is so sad, more wild floral areas are left uncut everywhere with hope things will improve. Beautifully written.
Welll done
Nicki x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Ah this is such a lovely poem about the wonderful bees. We have had such an issue in Ireland with numbers dwindling which is so sad, more wild floral areas are left uncut everywhere with hope things will improve. Beautifully written.
Welll done
Nicki x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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That's sad 😔 but thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved your questioning here as these bees do such an amazing job and only sting when they are threatened, an ambient nature post, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I loved your questioning here as these bees do such an amazing job and only sting when they are threatened, an ambient nature post, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Yes that's true 👍 Thank you.
Comment from zanya
Wow - an excellent juxtaposition here in this short format poem about our precious bees and their role in our world and eco system- wish I had a 6 remaining for this one.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Wow - an excellent juxtaposition here in this short format poem about our precious bees and their role in our world and eco system- wish I had a 6 remaining for this one.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest. I really like this poem. I think honeybees might be a little of both plus a whole lot more. They are such an important part of nature and the growth cycle. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the 3-6-9 poem contest. I really like this poem. I think honeybees might be a little of both plus a whole lot more. They are such an important part of nature and the growth cycle. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. You're right about honeybees. They play an important part in our ecosystem.
