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One Day Summer!

Loads of suntan in one day!

2 total reviews 
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
Exceptional
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I really enjoyed this poem! It perfectly captures the transition from dreary spring rain to the excitement of summer. The imagery of sunshine breaking through and people at the beach soaking up the rays feels so vivid and relatable. I can almost picture those "pallid limbs suntanning," which makes me yearn for those warm days. It's a lovely reminder of the joy that summer brings!


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am totally jealous here Julie as we have cool breezes, dull skies and rain, I just want to jump into your lovely poem and enjoyed the sunshine and swimming, a fine post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024


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