Is Life Worth Forgiving?
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Comment from Gloria ....
Author this is a good solid entry into the betrayal contest. It can be very difficult to live on with a good life after the death of a loved one so young.
There are quite a few typos
Filled with joy and ecstacy (ecstasy)
A lasting love was our acheivement (achievement)
T'was a cloudy day in Colorado 'twas
A bolt of lightening struck the grounds (lightning)
It sent her soul quckly realing (quickly reeling)
Each day I'd rise in dissapointment (disappointment)
If tradgedy is always near (tragedy)
Everyday get's better (gets)
Just go into your portfolio open this file and then make the changes.
That said, wishing you great luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
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Author this is a good solid entry into the betrayal contest. It can be very difficult to live on with a good life after the death of a loved one so young.
There are quite a few typos
Filled with joy and ecstacy (ecstasy)
A lasting love was our acheivement (achievement)
T'was a cloudy day in Colorado 'twas
A bolt of lightening struck the grounds (lightning)
It sent her soul quckly realing (quickly reeling)
Each day I'd rise in dissapointment (disappointment)
If tradgedy is always near (tragedy)
Everyday get's better (gets)
Just go into your portfolio open this file and then make the changes.
That said, wishing you great luck with the voters. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a deeply moving and heartfelt poem! You show the raw emotions that come with grief so well. It's beautiful how you share that carrying on for her makes you a better man. You show such strength as well as vulnerability in your poem. Thank you for sharing such a touching poem.
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What a deeply moving and heartfelt poem! You show the raw emotions that come with grief so well. It's beautiful how you share that carrying on for her makes you a better man. You show such strength as well as vulnerability in your poem. Thank you for sharing such a touching poem.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024