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Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "End of the Road For Jane"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
this was an interesting look at Jane's backround. It would probably at least explain her foul language and interest in writing pornographic prose. However, it doesn't excuse it. Many people are dealt a large bag of caca in their lives, but they manage to make something good out of it. Thanks for sharing this gal. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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Hello Gretchen,
this was an interesting look at Jane's backround. It would probably at least explain her foul language and interest in writing pornographic prose. However, it doesn't excuse it. Many people are dealt a large bag of caca in their lives, but they manage to make something good out of it. Thanks for sharing this gal. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Sankey
Finally got around to reading this right through. Very good as usual. I need to get more of my video stuff up. Dropped my beloved Nikon camera the other day. Hoping they can fix it for me.
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Finally got around to reading this right through. Very good as usual. I need to get more of my video stuff up. Dropped my beloved Nikon camera the other day. Hoping they can fix it for me.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Jim Wile
Alright, Gretchen! You figured out what Jane is all about now. How kind of you, though, not to foist her onto an innocent limo driver. This was another great and humorous chapter in this story, and now it sounds like she might make it to the FanStory convention after all. That will be a hoot if that comes to pass.
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Alright, Gretchen! You figured out what Jane is all about now. How kind of you, though, not to foist her onto an innocent limo driver. This was another great and humorous chapter in this story, and now it sounds like she might make it to the FanStory convention after all. That will be a hoot if that comes to pass.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Sanku
What a laugh! Our Miss Irritating is the heir apparent to a pornography kingdom.. That was a fab characterisation. And she flaunts it too ! Anyway what follows could be entertaining..
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What a laugh! Our Miss Irritating is the heir apparent to a pornography kingdom.. That was a fab characterisation. And she flaunts it too ! Anyway what follows could be entertaining..
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This sort of gives of background information on why Jane is a pain, but it's still no excuse. I am really liking this story. You and Rachelle work well together.
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This sort of gives of background information on why Jane is a pain, but it's still no excuse. I am really liking this story. You and Rachelle work well together.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have known a few Janes in my time, those who think they are better than others because they have money. I think we can all get the measure of someone very quickly with how they present themselves. I enjoyed your humour here Gretchen and you and Rachelle have finally offloaded the Jane problem onto someone else! But wait a minute, you decided to keep her on board? Oh no! Ha ha ha, a fine chapter, love Dolly x
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I have known a few Janes in my time, those who think they are better than others because they have money. I think we can all get the measure of someone very quickly with how they present themselves. I enjoyed your humour here Gretchen and you and Rachelle have finally offloaded the Jane problem onto someone else! But wait a minute, you decided to keep her on board? Oh no! Ha ha ha, a fine chapter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I still say you could have ditched her at Walmart. You did not invite her. She has offered no money. or paid for gas. Or helped in any way. Good story. Karen
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I still say you could have ditched her at Walmart. You did not invite her. She has offered no money. or paid for gas. Or helped in any way. Good story. Karen
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I agree with you about the entitled people or people who think they are "entitled." But I also agree even more with you about valuing good people like your father more than people who think wealth is a way to rate people like Trump does.
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I agree with you about the entitled people or people who think they are "entitled." But I also agree even more with you about valuing good people like your father more than people who think wealth is a way to rate people like Trump does.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
I have very much been enjoying reading this book that you and Rachel have been putting together and it seems that so it may be coming to an end at some point so I wish you the very best with the finishing up with the The story thank you for sharing. Patricia.
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I have very much been enjoying reading this book that you and Rachel have been putting together and it seems that so it may be coming to an end at some point so I wish you the very best with the finishing up with the The story thank you for sharing. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good response to Rachelle's chapter. I'm so surprised Jane hasn't been left for the limo driver, or at least a bus driver. Well now we know why Jane writes the kind of poetry she does. I enjoyed this! Carol
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Good response to Rachelle's chapter. I'm so surprised Jane hasn't been left for the limo driver, or at least a bus driver. Well now we know why Jane writes the kind of poetry she does. I enjoyed this! Carol
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024