A Meow-ry-go-Rhyme for Iza
For Iza Deleanu (all the fun 2 liners pertain to her cats)10 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Yes. I guess it's not hard to find another cat lady writer here at Fanstory. The cat photo is amazing but I can't say it's real. Where do you find so many cats? I like the Merry-go-rhyme poetic form. I should try to write one soon.
Well done.
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Haha. Yes. I guess it's not hard to find another cat lady writer here at Fanstory. The cat photo is amazing but I can't say it's real. Where do you find so many cats? I like the Merry-go-rhyme poetic form. I should try to write one soon.
Well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hi Debi!
More birthdays! And plenty of cats! I love the idea you have of this "merry-go-rhyme." You have some of the most amazingly fun ideas!
Okay, so Iza and I have a lot in common from what I have read. I am 50, she is 49. She's a writer, I'm a writer. She has cats, I used to have cats. BUT, most importantly of all, we are both single and want to stay that way! (You thought I was going in a different direction there, didn't you! *grins*)
I love how you use the two-line stanzas for her cats. I also loved all the "cat" puns you used throughout. I should have pulled them out while I read, but no, let me go back and find them (it's like an Easter egg hunt!).
---"had to [paws] her poem"
---"thinks [purrhaps] it could"
---"the most [purrfect] trip but she"
---"looking good and [feline] fine"
Awesome, Debi! I LOVE puns and all word-play. The more the better!
Talk to you again soon! I am sure another member birthday is right around the corner! ((Have you been jotting down all the words that rhyme with Patrick? *giggles*))
Patrick
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Hi Debi!
More birthdays! And plenty of cats! I love the idea you have of this "merry-go-rhyme." You have some of the most amazingly fun ideas!
Okay, so Iza and I have a lot in common from what I have read. I am 50, she is 49. She's a writer, I'm a writer. She has cats, I used to have cats. BUT, most importantly of all, we are both single and want to stay that way! (You thought I was going in a different direction there, didn't you! *grins*)
I love how you use the two-line stanzas for her cats. I also loved all the "cat" puns you used throughout. I should have pulled them out while I read, but no, let me go back and find them (it's like an Easter egg hunt!).
---"had to [paws] her poem"
---"thinks [purrhaps] it could"
---"the most [purrfect] trip but she"
---"looking good and [feline] fine"
Awesome, Debi! I LOVE puns and all word-play. The more the better!
Talk to you again soon! I am sure another member birthday is right around the corner! ((Have you been jotting down all the words that rhyme with Patrick? *giggles*))
Patrick
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from karenina
It's evident you put a lit of thought into this birthday tribute... as always. This was a lot of fun to read, Debi.
USA should be delighted! I have a faint recollection of 49...(LOL)
ALMOST TIME FOR YOU, BIRTHDAY GIRL!
SHHH. (I won't tell a soul you're turning 70 on the 19th!)
Ooops!
Karenina
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It's evident you put a lit of thought into this birthday tribute... as always. This was a lot of fun to read, Debi.
USA should be delighted! I have a faint recollection of 49...(LOL)
ALMOST TIME FOR YOU, BIRTHDAY GIRL!
SHHH. (I won't tell a soul you're turning 70 on the 19th!)
Ooops!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from Heather Knight
You know lots of people here on FS! What is Iza's handle here if I may ask?
I found your poem incredibly funny with the purrfect, the paws...
Thanks so much for caring about everybody and for making me smile once again.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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You know lots of people here on FS! What is Iza's handle here if I may ask?
I found your poem incredibly funny with the purrfect, the paws...
Thanks so much for caring about everybody and for making me smile once again.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Hey sweetie, I get to see you three times tonight. Wow. Iza is just called her name Iza Delaneau. I always put their pen name in the introduction part by the title. Yup she just uses her name.
I do appreciated you so very much and all your kind comments, and the lovely stars too. Thanks so very much, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from DonandVicki
I am impressed at how you come up with these birthday poems and it is obvious that you put a lot of time and effort into these excellent poetic tributes. The media complements your poem.
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I am impressed at how you come up with these birthday poems and it is obvious that you put a lot of time and effort into these excellent poetic tributes. The media complements your poem.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I have no idea how anyone posed so many cats, maybe it's AI. I assume Iza isn't the owner of that many cats. I also hope her birthday is great and she should really enjoy it because she can still think of herself as young.
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I have no idea how anyone posed so many cats, maybe it's AI. I assume Iza isn't the owner of that many cats. I also hope her birthday is great and she should really enjoy it because she can still think of herself as young.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
Iza might be incognito at the moment, but at least she has her cats! I wonder how many she has - a busload? I loved this poem. Getting to know Iza was a pleasure. Keep them coming, Debi.
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Iza might be incognito at the moment, but at least she has her cats! I wonder how many she has - a busload? I loved this poem. Getting to know Iza was a pleasure. Keep them coming, Debi.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I enjoyed the puns in this birthday poem. Your picture was funny and cute and I loved how you brought it front and center with the ending. This was a very fun birthday poem. Gretchen
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I enjoyed the puns in this birthday poem. Your picture was funny and cute and I loved how you brought it front and center with the ending. This was a very fun birthday poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
A nice birthday poem for Iza's 49th. I love the picture! I can't imagine herding all those cats to take a picture! Lol! You gave us lots of good information about Iza. I hope she has a wonderful birthday. Blessings to you both. Carol
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A nice birthday poem for Iza's 49th. I love the picture! I can't imagine herding all those cats to take a picture! Lol! You gave us lots of good information about Iza. I hope she has a wonderful birthday. Blessings to you both. Carol
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh my goodness, that photo is amazing! Your poem is purrfect and I enjoyed the videos very much too. Wishing Iza the happiest of birthdays filled with friends both the two-legged and the four-legged kind!
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Oh my goodness, that photo is amazing! Your poem is purrfect and I enjoyed the videos very much too. Wishing Iza the happiest of birthdays filled with friends both the two-legged and the four-legged kind!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024