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Murder At The Berkshire

Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Case Solved"
Things aren't as they seem at the elderly home.

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Comment from Wendy G
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Lol. A clever finale. I never would have guessed this ending, so you did a great job of deflecting us from the truth. The great thing is that she now has lots of friends, and they are all having fun. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank Wendy. I appreciate you staying with me the whole way!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Eat your heart out, Agatha, Doug has arrived! Well, obviously, you fooled us all with this very clever ending. Never an easy thing to achieve but you did it with style. And I love that final sentence. All good fun and very satisfying. Well done, Doug! Debbie

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your kindness!
Comment from royowen
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This is so close to being like Miss Marple in the Agatha Christie's character, you've coined it rather well, Hattie is a dead ringer. So, we find that old Mr Howell didn't really die in questionable circumstances, but did die. I love your characters, which always humanises the interest in stories, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Roy!!!
reply by royowen on 20-Nov-2024
    Welcome
Comment from Teri7
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This is a six star chapter to me. I wish I had gotten in on it from the first. Do you plan on doing another one anytime soon? if you think of it please let me know. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you!
reply by Teri7 on 20-Nov-2024
    you are so welcome!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I hate to see this story end. I really do hope you decide to solve the mystery of Old Mister Mcgillicuddy disappearance. I am also missing my boyfriend, Greg. Love your writing.

Guess I am a co-conspirator in your little drama bexause I was the one who slipped (because)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you! You are a great supporter, Barbara. Praying for your publishing situation!
Comment from Begin Again
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I would feel terrible if I hadn't still had a six to give you for this wonderful ending, Doug. You did a magnificent job with the story and the ending was a surprise. I had so much fun reading it and playing detective along with the gang.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you, my dear friend!
Comment from Sally Law
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I've been completely out of the loop for a month, dear D. Health stuff. I'm sorry to be so behind with you. A brilliant wrap-up nonetheless. How clever of Hattie to devise a murder mystery to wake up the bored residents and staff of The Berkshire.

One nit I couldn't make out: Everyo The others looked at Hattie, who said, "Nope. You are forgetting the two clues we found in room 312."

Other than that, Perfecto!
Sending along my very best today as always.
Sal :)) xo

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Sally! Appreciate you. Hope your heath is back in good standing!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Oh, you poot! No fair. You sucked me in good you rat fink. This was quite delicious. I am heartily impressed. Very good writing Agatha. I hope you have a very good week., and a Happy Halloween. Karen

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Karen You are a doll!
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 20-Nov-2024
    Yep, I am a treat all right. :-) I am about to unleash a four part story on a serial killer. Karen