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At the Master's Feet

A 3-6-9 poem.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

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whose His instruction --> who His instruction

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you. I appreciate the correction.
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem beautifully captures the longing to be close to God, like Mary sitting at Jesus's feet. The simple, repeated imagery reflects a deep desire to learn and connect with Him, reminding us to set aside distractions and seek His presence through scripture and faith.


 Comment Written 31-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you for reading and for the rating.
reply by Brandy N. Morrison on 01-Nov-2024
    Your welcome!