Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Awe, isn't that sweet. Congratulations on 35 years. Happy Anniversary, Heather and Hubby! After all this time, I guess it's safe to say it worked.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Debi,

This is the sweetest poem ever. for your friend Heather to give her husband on his birthday. What a wonderful gift to give. Words are like painting a picture of their lives and celebrating their marriage that ages gracefully like proverbial fine wine. Wonderfully written in your unique style!

Thanks for sharing...

All the best,
Senyai

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hi Senyai, you are so sweet and I thank you for this lovely review and comments. They mean the world to me. This was different for me but I was so happy that her husband liked it. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

Hi Debi, this is a beautiful poem. I like how you started from the beginning when they met until now. The poem is so descriptive and rhymes nicely. Great writing. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hi Brenda, you are so sweet and I thank you for this lovely review and comments. They mean the world to me. This was different for me but I was so happy that her husband liked it. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Oh, Debi,
This poem is so precious. You've built a lovely gift for Heather to give her husband. It flows beautifully and the rhymes are spot on. We get to know a little more about Heather, and that's a good thing.

Big hugs for both of you,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hi there Rhonda, you are so sweet and I thank you for this lovely review and comments. They mean the world to me. This was different for me but I was so happy that her husband liked it. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi

Comment from ESOSTINE

Excellent

This is another well written tribute to the husband of a Fanstory member, Heather. I have no doubt that the young man' heart will be gladdened with this beautiful piece. Great work, dear Debi. Enjoy the day.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hi there Esostine, You are so sweet and I thank you for this lovely review and comments. They mean the world to me. This was different for me but I was so happy that her husband liked it. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

I'll make this short. Another magnificent tribute Mrs. Marquette. Your poetry sits where it should be, at, or near the top of Fanstory's very best. Your writing's so good, I might even claim you as a relly. (relative)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hello cousin Bob, how have you been? Always good to have a relative say such nice things about you. You do realize that you're now my favorite cousin? LOL. Thanks again!! Love, Debi

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and I am sure that Heather's husband will enjoy the poem that has she had you right for their wedding anniversary 35 years. That's an amazing achievement in these days. Have a good day and may God bless you.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

Hi Patricia, you are so sweet and I thank you for this lovely review and comments. They mean the world to me. This was different for me but I was so happy that her husband liked it. Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi

Comment from karenina

Excellent

When do you have a moment to breathe? My goodness, but you've been busy with tons of birthday poems, and now this -- a beautiful anniversary poem honoring Heather and her husband of thirty-five years!

I've told you before that you could go to an independent site and charge money for these poems! (And you, modestly, answered that you see it as a calling from God)--

It's lovely, Debi. I'm sorry I'm late reviewing -- you know I've got my hands full at the moment.

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thanks K, I too thought this was some of my best work but now that I am done with this busy week, I am going to go look at what you showed me and see if there is anything there for me. I have been disappointed in a few things lately where it is obvious that some are not reading completely and I can still have the same satisfaction if someone is paying me instead of me spending a fortune on them. So we will see how it goes. Thanks so much for the kindness. Love, Debi

reply by karenina on 05-Nov-2024

I still think it's a great idea!

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Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Happy Anniversary to them both. It's a testament to their love that they've been together for so many years. This is a rare thing these days. Thank you for sharing this sentimental piece, Debi.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I'm so sorry, Debi, missing this anniversary tribute to Heather or Maria. And now I'm late to wish dear Maria a very Happy Anniversary. I feel I know her well and especially with our mutual friend Deborah (who's been off-line for a while) This verse will be an absolute delight for her and Adri. I'm always so envious of their busy life in Spain and, as for their differences:
"But the key to our marriage is to give each other a break. And to realise that it's not how our similarities work together; it's how our differences work together" (Michael J Fox - together since 1987)
Thank you so much for sharing, Debi. Love Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Oh Debbie, I am a bit confused. It is like we are talking about two different pieces altogether. Obviously you know Maria well too but it was for their anniversary not for her birthday and she gave me notes of her life with her husband and had me write a poem to him from her.
Thanks tho for the kind words.
Love, Debi