Rainbow Birds
Contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
First off I just wanted to say that visually your portfolio is a delight to behold.
Butterflies, shimmering humming birds and this lorikeet from Australia.
I would love to have one as a pet .. those vivid hues are mesmerising.
Have my personal rainbow.. it would make any rainy day bright.
Thank you for introducing this stunning feathered beauty.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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First off I just wanted to say that visually your portfolio is a delight to behold.
Butterflies, shimmering humming birds and this lorikeet from Australia.
I would love to have one as a pet .. those vivid hues are mesmerising.
Have my personal rainbow.. it would make any rainy day bright.
Thank you for introducing this stunning feathered beauty.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your delightful review. It is very much
Comment from fm wright
A very nice contest entry. The beautiful image goes very well with the words. The syllable count is perfect. Each stanza is wonderfully connected to the others. Best of wishes with this contest entry.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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A very nice contest entry. The beautiful image goes very well with the words. The syllable count is perfect. Each stanza is wonderfully connected to the others. Best of wishes with this contest entry.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-The bird is very intent on whatever it is doing.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A good introductory verse.
-Good emphasis and description of its colors.
-A very good closing verse that shows
your appreciation for its beauty.
*One minor thing: the last line is smaller than the others.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Patricia.
-The bird is very intent on whatever it is doing.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-A good introductory verse.
-Good emphasis and description of its colors.
-A very good closing verse that shows
your appreciation for its beauty.
*One minor thing: the last line is smaller than the others.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your excellent review. It is appreciate
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
We do love our rainbow lorikeets and I see them quite often in the wild as there are lots of parks and trees near my home. When our flowering gum is in bloom around Christmas the rainbow lorikeets flock to it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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We do love our rainbow lorikeets and I see them quite often in the wild as there are lots of parks and trees near my home. When our flowering gum is in bloom around Christmas the rainbow lorikeets flock to it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read the review of my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a beautiful picture of the lorikeet! I didn't realize it was native to Australia. This is a nice 3-6-9 poem for the contest, and I like the presentation you used. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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What a beautiful picture of the lorikeet! I didn't realize it was native to Australia. This is a nice 3-6-9 poem for the contest, and I like the presentation you used. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from judiverse
Your lines in this flow very smoothly. They are certainly colorful birds. I can understand being mesmerized by it. Great picture to show the colors that you write about in your poem and lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Your lines in this flow very smoothly. They are certainly colorful birds. I can understand being mesmerized by it. Great picture to show the colors that you write about in your poem and lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it. Have a good week.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for this "National Geographic" poem about the stunning lorikeet of Australia. You told us lots of good facts about this "rainbow" bird in your 3-6-9. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thanks for this "National Geographic" poem about the stunning lorikeet of Australia. You told us lots of good facts about this "rainbow" bird in your 3-6-9. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it. Have a good evening.
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You, too, Patricia. Tonight is prayer night. It's always good!
Comment from Karen Cherry
A nice little poem. The picture adds plenty of punch. The matting is perky and the font is nice and big, just the way I like it. It is going to be a long night here in Texas. Love to you and yours. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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A nice little poem. The picture adds plenty of punch. The matting is perky and the font is nice and big, just the way I like it. It is going to be a long night here in Texas. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your nice review. I appreciated it and I wish you the very best for the next day.
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:-)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Patricia,
You right such beautiful poems and the pictures are always awesome.
You are a very talented author my friend and I look forward to you next masterpiece.
Great job
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Patricia,
You right such beautiful poems and the pictures are always awesome.
You are a very talented author my friend and I look forward to you next masterpiece.
Great job
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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This is an absolutely lovely review and I thank you so much for it.
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You're welcome. I spelled write wrong I guess I should check my review before I write it.
Cecilia
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm mesmerized by it's beauty myself. A gorgeous bird and an excellent contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm mesmerized by it's beauty myself. A gorgeous bird and an excellent contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review. I am glad you enjoyed this.
