Cabin in the Cove
Take a picture and write a poem35 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this rhymed poem about a picturesque cabin that helps show what the early Tennessee settlers had to work to produce. Favorite lines:
Neighbors befriended, soon became blended
into a community.
The churches they'd build, would quickly be filled
with spirits of harmony.
Congratulations on the second place win!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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I liked reading this rhymed poem about a picturesque cabin that helps show what the early Tennessee settlers had to work to produce. Favorite lines:
Neighbors befriended, soon became blended
into a community.
The churches they'd build, would quickly be filled
with spirits of harmony.
Congratulations on the second place win!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Crystie, I was fun to write about a place I enjoy going. I've been there many times and sometime just to drive through. If you like taking pictures there are beautiful landscapes and wild animal to photograph.
Beth
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Thank you, Crystie, I was fun to write about a place I enjoy going. I've been there many times and sometime just to drive through. If you like taking pictures there are beautiful landscapes and wild animal to photograph.
Beth
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Beth, both your photograph and your writing are winners. You let your image lead you into the experience and with your words, you took us with you. So deserving of its win. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Beth, both your photograph and your writing are winners. You let your image lead you into the experience and with your words, you took us with you. So deserving of its win. Congratulations.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Ginda. I really appreciate your review and comments.
I am delighted with the six stars.
Beth
Comment from gramalot8
I spent many years living near the foothills of a small mountain in Idsho. We often rode horseback up into the hills.One of our favorite destinations was to ride to " Mikes Cabin "... a long time abandoned cabin once inhabited by s msn everyone referred to as Mike. I never did hear anyone actually proclaim they knew him or he was a family member. You really didn't go into the cabin because it was too daisnd unstable but we spent msny evenings enjoying the beautiful views and the campfire hot dogs on a stick. Thanks for reminding me of these great memories.
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I spent many years living near the foothills of a small mountain in Idsho. We often rode horseback up into the hills.One of our favorite destinations was to ride to " Mikes Cabin "... a long time abandoned cabin once inhabited by s msn everyone referred to as Mike. I never did hear anyone actually proclaim they knew him or he was a family member. You really didn't go into the cabin because it was too daisnd unstable but we spent msny evenings enjoying the beautiful views and the campfire hot dogs on a stick. Thanks for reminding me of these great memories.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from zanya
This is a great title and who could resist reading about that color- filled cove full of autumnal beauty 'a rare historical sight' adds interest to the topic
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This is a great title and who could resist reading about that color- filled cove full of autumnal beauty 'a rare historical sight' adds interest to the topic
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
I love this.
It has such a great rhythm and meter to it, it flows off the tongue and into the mind like a song
Beautiful imagery, it reminds me of a great song by Dire Straits, Look up the lyrics to 'Telegraph Road' or better yet, if you don't know the song, give it a listen.
Tim
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I love this.
It has such a great rhythm and meter to it, it flows off the tongue and into the mind like a song
Beautiful imagery, it reminds me of a great song by Dire Straits, Look up the lyrics to 'Telegraph Road' or better yet, if you don't know the song, give it a listen.
Tim
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from Boogienights
I would love to explore what sounds like a magical place. I love both nature and historical places, so this is for me! Love the included picture. :) best of luck in the contest .
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I would love to explore what sounds like a magical place. I love both nature and historical places, so this is for me! Love the included picture. :) best of luck in the contest .
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from gansach
This is a gorgeous photo to illustrate your lovely poem. I like the rhyme scheme and the easy rhythm, the descriptions are vivid and interesting. They definitely draw the reader into the scene and make me want to visit. A great entry for the Share a Photo Poetry competition. Well done!
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This is a gorgeous photo to illustrate your lovely poem. I like the rhyme scheme and the easy rhythm, the descriptions are vivid and interesting. They definitely draw the reader into the scene and make me want to visit. A great entry for the Share a Photo Poetry competition. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from CM Pickard
There's a bit of old fashioned charm to this piece that makes it not just a joy to read but endearing. It had me driving through that village with you. Great work
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There's a bit of old fashioned charm to this piece that makes it not just a joy to read but endearing. It had me driving through that village with you. Great work
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I just love your contest entry here, Beth -- a virtual six, my lady!! ;) ;) Absolutely melodic with your rhyme scheme and quite enchanting in word choice!! :) Thanx so much for sharing and I look forward to seeing how you do in the contest! ;) Yvette
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Oh, I just love your contest entry here, Beth -- a virtual six, my lady!! ;) ;) Absolutely melodic with your rhyme scheme and quite enchanting in word choice!! :) Thanx so much for sharing and I look forward to seeing how you do in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Holy smokes Batman! That is an amazing piece of poetry! I could almost see myself sitting there enjoying that gorgeous cabin and the beautiful scenery!
And especially fond of your word choices in the rhyming scheme, you chose! Such talent!
Nice to know it's a real place, too. Thank you for this really great piece of poetry, definitely hearts in everything you write. There's only one cure for this poem. Here it is!
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Holy smokes Batman! That is an amazing piece of poetry! I could almost see myself sitting there enjoying that gorgeous cabin and the beautiful scenery!
And especially fond of your word choices in the rhyming scheme, you chose! Such talent!
Nice to know it's a real place, too. Thank you for this really great piece of poetry, definitely hearts in everything you write. There's only one cure for this poem. Here it is!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2024