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When the hurt is new

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a good opening stanza for the 369 contest but you need to be aware that for the contest you must have three stanzas you might want to go back and add Two more,.I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a blessed weekend. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    I don't now how I missed that. Thank you
Comment from Julie G1
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This verse depicts an excellent response to the prompt. The poet has chosen a theme that resonates with many a womanly reader. Don't ever look back, we are better off!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to review.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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I think this happens to everyone at some point. I love this poem for that reason. Thanks for sharing and good luck with it!!!! Happy writing!!!!!!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
    Thank you