Beauty of the Butterfly
Beauty is pain, represented by a butterfly.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Welcome to Fanstory A M
This is a nicely done metaphoric 3-6-9 about the ups and downs of love. It is right that their is no love without pain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry. There is a link to it on Amazon.com at the bottom of my profile page. Also you can search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
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Welcome to Fanstory A M
This is a nicely done metaphoric 3-6-9 about the ups and downs of love. It is right that their is no love without pain.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry. There is a link to it on Amazon.com at the bottom of my profile page. Also you can search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 3-6-9 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 3-6-9 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from Regina Elliott
A unique butterfly poem,
dear poet. I extend my very
best wishes for the contest
with this poem that to me
conveys sorrow. I hope you
have a cozy November eve.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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A unique butterfly poem,
dear poet. I extend my very
best wishes for the contest
with this poem that to me
conveys sorrow. I hope you
have a cozy November eve.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you, you as well
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congratulations on your first post! I love the imagery in your poem. The change from silver to crimson in the butterfly's wings is so striking. The way you share movement with such few words is impressive. It feels like the butterfly is fluttering right before me! A beautiful first poem!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Congratulations on your first post! I love the imagery in your poem. The change from silver to crimson in the butterfly's wings is so striking. The way you share movement with such few words is impressive. It feels like the butterfly is fluttering right before me! A beautiful first poem!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, I appreciate you :)
