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A question of love6 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
I like the way you have constructed this 3-6-9 as a conversation between two people. I don't think I've seen that done before. By the way, for the contest, you will need to extend it, for the rules state "This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines".
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I like the way you have constructed this 3-6-9 as a conversation between two people. I don't think I've seen that done before. By the way, for the contest, you will need to extend it, for the rules state "This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines".
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and you have presented it very well. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and may God bless your day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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This is very nicely written and you have presented it very well. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend and may God bless your day. Patricia.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gunner,
What a lovely 3-6-9 poem. Those three lines have a powerful punch. The picture compliments the poem well. The first true love is always the best.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Gunner,
What a lovely 3-6-9 poem. Those three lines have a powerful punch. The picture compliments the poem well. The first true love is always the best.
Great job and good luck in your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
aww this is soo cuute : ) thanks for for a lovely 3-6-9 Love poem, this made me smile, so much feeling to express in just a few adorable words... I hope you win the contest. Sarah
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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aww this is soo cuute : ) thanks for for a lovely 3-6-9 Love poem, this made me smile, so much feeling to express in just a few adorable words... I hope you win the contest. Sarah
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from BlueMarble
Off to a good start, but this contest calls for 3 stanzas -
" "3-6-9 Poem
Poetry Contest
This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines that follows the 3-6-9 syllable count. The first line has 3 syllables, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line 9 syllables. The subject can be anything."
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Off to a good start, but this contest calls for 3 stanzas -
" "3-6-9 Poem
Poetry Contest
This poem has three stanzas. Each stanza has three lines that follows the 3-6-9 syllable count. The first line has 3 syllables, the second line has 6 syllables and the last line 9 syllables. The subject can be anything."
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Comment from F. William Lester
Nice work, Lil. Knowing your background, I believe the story behind this poem is deployment, when Uncle Sam decides to yank us from our loved ones and sends us fifty miles north of east Rooster Poop, telling us we'll be gone for only a week and we come home six months later. All too familiar and it's tough for both partners. Been there, done that. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day, Frank.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Nice work, Lil. Knowing your background, I believe the story behind this poem is deployment, when Uncle Sam decides to yank us from our loved ones and sends us fifty miles north of east Rooster Poop, telling us we'll be gone for only a week and we come home six months later. All too familiar and it's tough for both partners. Been there, done that. Thanks for sharing it. Have a wonderful day, Frank.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
