He is sailing
Enjoying the pleasure of the ocean31 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry
The picture is lovely and the poem was easy to follow and the flow is good. I enjoyed it. I haven't seen you before.
I have only been here a year and a half, but I can tell you, this place has saved my life. Keep writing. Karen
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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The picture is lovely and the poem was easy to follow and the flow is good. I enjoyed it. I haven't seen you before.
I have only been here a year and a half, but I can tell you, this place has saved my life. Keep writing. Karen
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hi Karen Thanks for reviewing my poem and the six stars I agree with you FS is a great place for writers You keep writing to
Cheers NanaGaye
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
NanaGaye,
What a wonderful poem. I like how you say, "reflecting on many memories the good the bad the happy the sad." I guess life is all about all those memories. We wouldn't be living our best life without them. The picture is a nice compliment to the poem.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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NanaGaye,
What a wonderful poem. I like how you say, "reflecting on many memories the good the bad the happy the sad." I guess life is all about all those memories. We wouldn't be living our best life without them. The picture is a nice compliment to the poem.
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks Cecilia I appreciate your reading my story and thanks for the six stars
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Colorado Owl
What a great reminder to always be looking forward to what's next. Hold on to the memories, hopefully more good and happy than bad and sad! Well done, Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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What a great reminder to always be looking forward to what's next. Hold on to the memories, hopefully more good and happy than bad and sad! Well done, Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for reviewing my writing and the lovely stars
Comment from Neonewman
Yes! Keep sailing, indeed. I fish, and my time in my boat is spiritually healing. This is a wonderfully crafted piece and a great entry for this contest.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Yes! Keep sailing, indeed. I fish, and my time in my boat is spiritually healing. This is a wonderfully crafted piece and a great entry for this contest.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks Steve I really appreciate your comments and of course the lovely stars
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My pleasure.
Comment from CM Pickard
I really like how you've connected the sea to emotions in what is a great entry for this contest. There's a resilience that shines through this poem that is lovely. Great work.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I really like how you've connected the sea to emotions in what is a great entry for this contest. There's a resilience that shines through this poem that is lovely. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reading my poem and of course the lovely stars
Comment from Dawn Munro
This sweet 3-6-9 poem captures the essence of nostalgia, and evokes a wonderful sense of serenity. Although I have limited experience with sailing, I enjoyed this very much! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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This sweet 3-6-9 poem captures the essence of nostalgia, and evokes a wonderful sense of serenity. Although I have limited experience with sailing, I enjoyed this very much! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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So pleased you enjoyed my poem Thanks for the six stars
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You are very welcome -- well-earned.
Comment from Shanbreen
Well written Nanagaye. Love the simple manner in which you encourage us to keep on sailing--- for the future is unknown. There is indeed no sense in reflecting on the past, unless of course, it helps plan the future.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Well written Nanagaye. Love the simple manner in which you encourage us to keep on sailing--- for the future is unknown. There is indeed no sense in reflecting on the past, unless of course, it helps plan the future.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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I appreciate your great comments and of course the lovely stars
Comment from estory
The mood is sublime, the voice is contemplative, and the imagery speaks of the freedom of the open skies, and the open sea, a chance to strike out and break with the known and discover the unknown. estory
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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The mood is sublime, the voice is contemplative, and the imagery speaks of the freedom of the open skies, and the open sea, a chance to strike out and break with the known and discover the unknown. estory
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for your great comments and of course the lovely stars
Comment from bob cullen
Is that his boat? Judging from the size of the man on the boat, it's a fair size. That's a gorgeous photo of the ocean. Where abouts is it? Does he still sail at all? Lucky man. A beautifully written poem.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Is that his boat? Judging from the size of the man on the boat, it's a fair size. That's a gorgeous photo of the ocean. Where abouts is it? Does he still sail at all? Lucky man. A beautifully written poem.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Hi Bob First of all thanks for the lovely stars. No not my husband's boat, it is a lovely picture. No more sailing big boats he is now doing remote controlled model boats.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is beautifully presented to get your reader in the mood for a sunlit sail! Your 3-6-9 suite flows seamlessly down the page in a rather meditative and dreamy style which is pleasing to read. Very well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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This is beautifully presented to get your reader in the mood for a sunlit sail! Your 3-6-9 suite flows seamlessly down the page in a rather meditative and dreamy style which is pleasing to read. Very well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the stars and lovely comments
