Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Teacher on the Loose"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
18 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! It seems Miranda has watched way too many horror flicks in her youth and they are coming back to haunt her in dreams! I know she has a strong, innate sense about people so I'm guessing something will be revealed about Tomlin soon!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Oh dear! It seems Miranda has watched way too many horror flicks in her youth and they are coming back to haunt her in dreams! I know she has a strong, innate sense about people so I'm guessing something will be revealed about Tomlin soon!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Miranda is like me, in that she has a running line of worst case scenarios 24/7. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I had nightmares about school when i was little. I attended catholic school. It was horrible. The teachers torture the kids, like making us stand facing the corner, kneel with arms up facing the ceiling with books on our hands, hit our hands with a ruler, ridiculed us infant of the class, etc
Mr. Tomlin is a horrible man. I hope Miranda beats the hell out of him, dressed like a ninja.
Another excellent chapter. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I had nightmares about school when i was little. I attended catholic school. It was horrible. The teachers torture the kids, like making us stand facing the corner, kneel with arms up facing the ceiling with books on our hands, hit our hands with a ruler, ridiculed us infant of the class, etc
Mr. Tomlin is a horrible man. I hope Miranda beats the hell out of him, dressed like a ninja.
Another excellent chapter. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I like the ninja angle but that isn't her style. She will more likely give him a good tongue lashing. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
once again I'm out of sixes. Its like offering a dollar for a ten dollar story, but it's all I've got gal. I absolutely love the way you write. The characters are so life-like, and the problems they face so very real. I think Miranda is going to be glad that her boyfriend is the sheriff before all is said and done. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
once again I'm out of sixes. Its like offering a dollar for a ten dollar story, but it's all I've got gal. I absolutely love the way you write. The characters are so life-like, and the problems they face so very real. I think Miranda is going to be glad that her boyfriend is the sheriff before all is said and done. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Tom. Somehow, this will turn south somehow. Appreciate your feedback. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
In stories or real life either one, when we have one of those bad feelings that something is about to happen, we'd better trust our instincts, because they'll be right more than wrong. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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In stories or real life either one, when we have one of those bad feelings that something is about to happen, we'd better trust our instincts, because they'll be right more than wrong. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Ric. I learned early how a gut feeling can save you. Never doubt it. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a good title. It'll draw the reader in. It sounds like we're coming to the real crux of the problem. Good use of stream of consciousness like Jack London uses, in his book to light a fire.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This is a good title. It'll draw the reader in. It sounds like we're coming to the real crux of the problem. Good use of stream of consciousness like Jack London uses, in his book to light a fire.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much! Gretchen
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You are very welcome
Comment from Jim Wile
I love hearing Miranda's internal thoughts as she debates with herself in the mirror. What a great vehicle for showing how she puzzles things out. The mirror won't let her fool herself either.
I loved how you built up the suspense, especially with that dream scene at the end. I'm not sure who Ed Preston was, but he sure awakens some horror within her.
Tomlin is definitely a creep, and a showdown is looming. Can't wait for it. Great chapter, Gretchen.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I love hearing Miranda's internal thoughts as she debates with herself in the mirror. What a great vehicle for showing how she puzzles things out. The mirror won't let her fool herself either.
I loved how you built up the suspense, especially with that dream scene at the end. I'm not sure who Ed Preston was, but he sure awakens some horror within her.
Tomlin is definitely a creep, and a showdown is looming. Can't wait for it. Great chapter, Gretchen.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Ed Preston was in the first Muranda book. Miranda found his body. I can't imagine that would be an easy thing to forget. Lol. Thank you for this awesome feedback. I appreciate the extra star. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Yep, that's right, I've met a few like Tomlin, and I almost always crack, believe me they are the idiots, they may get away with some things in this life, but not the next. However the gospel says to love them, as God loves us, leave judgement in His, boy that tests me, and finds me out, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Yep, that's right, I've met a few like Tomlin, and I almost always crack, believe me they are the idiots, they may get away with some things in this life, but not the next. However the gospel says to love them, as God loves us, leave judgement in His, boy that tests me, and finds me out, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I know we're supposed to love our neighbor and not judge people, but man, is that ever tough. Thank you for the nice review. Gretchen
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If it was easy, we wouldn't have to told. Heh heh
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That's true
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I doubt Miranda is willing to get Mitch involved at this point, but it would probably be a good idea. I really like this story.
Alligators smile in a similar fashion, flashing teeth and cold reptilian eyes. (I didn't know alligators smile, but if they did, you described them perfectly. LOL)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I doubt Miranda is willing to get Mitch involved at this point, but it would probably be a good idea. I really like this story.
Alligators smile in a similar fashion, flashing teeth and cold reptilian eyes. (I didn't know alligators smile, but if they did, you described them perfectly. LOL)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I'm glad you enjoyed this. And yes, Alligators do smile. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Samantha Wymer
I can feel the love Miranda has for Waylon. She's fighting with everything she's got to keep him. How much you love somebody is how much you're willing to fight for them. Great poem.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I can feel the love Miranda has for Waylon. She's fighting with everything she's got to keep him. How much you love somebody is how much you're willing to fight for them. Great poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much. Yes, Miranda has definitely taken Waylon on as her own. Gretchen
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Welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting story to listen to, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud your sentence structure your paragraph in your punctuation. Make it for a very good story to listen to. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This is a very interesting story to listen to, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud your sentence structure your paragraph in your punctuation. Make it for a very good story to listen to. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. Gretchen
