Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a great recollection of all the fun the young ones have in the snow!! :) Wonderful entry for this limited form and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks for read and encouraging review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really liked this piece. It does bring back great memories, a touch of the observational to rekindle thoughts of past.
There's a nice resonance to the work.

All syllables present and correct which is always nice as well!

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thank you so much for the encouraging review. Much appreciated.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

Children, unlike oldsters, find much to enjoy in winter as you have shown us in this poem. You also bring back fond memories of how we spent snow days when there was no school. Rod

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thanks for the read and review. Pleased it brought back pleasent memories of fun in the snow.