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Each one teach one

My philosophy

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Comment from karenina
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Great poem with an important message! It's said "Each one teach one" originated as an African-American proverb.

In the days of slavery there was little opportunity to learn. When a slave was taught to read it became a responsibility to teach that skill to another...

It's been adopted throughout the world and as a motto for many learning institutions.

I smiled as I read this because my nephew is in kindergarten and his teacher ordered tee-shirts for each child in her class...with this motto.

They wear them on Mondays, and the entire class "brainstorms" what each of them knows that they can teach!


You suggest that this is a wonderful habit to adopt in or out of the classroom, and I enthusiastically agree...

I love your line:

"By working together
we can reach past the sun..."

Nurses use this philosophy frequently!
Teaching a new diabetic, for example, can be a scary experience. Gather a group of four or five new diabetics, pass out oranges, demonstrate how to properly give an injection... (Into the orange) then sit back and smile as each person engages with the next...

Suddenly the "students" are teachers!

This poem is a perfect example of teaching us a new way to I interact!

Love that!

Karenina




 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from Colorado Owl
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Well done! We so often diminish ourselves, never considering that we are all teachers, and have a responsibility to help others. It's so much easier to jusr follow. Thank you.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

Comment from kiwisteveh
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Hi, Jesse. Your poem is well constructed with its consistent use of rhyme holding it together, and of course has a fine message summed up in the title and final line 'each one teach one.'

I do have a query about the presentation with so much separation between lines that the reader is likely to get lost.

Steve

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    So far, no one has gotten lost at least they haven't said they got lost.
    I chose the placement of the lines for emphasis. Thank you for your suggestion anyway.
    Enjoy the evening.
    Jesse
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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My mantra too. Learn one teach two. On here we are teaching all the time. I help out, any way I can whenever I can. We lead by example. You said this all very well. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    You are very good at helping others, my friend. Agreed, we lead by example. I am not surprised that this is your mantra too. Your kindness follows you wherever you go.
    Take good care of yourself, my friend.
    Jesse
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 21-Nov-2024
    Keep slowly walking one foot in front of the other and you will get there before you know it.
    Love to you and yours Karen
Comment from kahpot
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Love your philosophy, "each one teach one" and yes, today, I really don't understand why we/people keep putting things off, they only keep building and getting worse, so very well said and written****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thanks for your supportive and encouraging review. I am glad you like my philosophy. Procrastination never gets anything done.
    Enjoy the evening.
    Jesse
Comment from Aussie
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When one sheep jumps, the others follow. We all have something we can teach another and in turn we can be taught. We are here to help one another. No man is an Island. I liked the lesson through your poetry. Nobody is a walking dictionary, our experiences are our book of knowledge. Stored away waiting to help our brother or sister. Blessings, K xx

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thanks for sharing your philosophy. I agree, nobody is a walking dictionary. We must help each other.
    Thanks for the blessings.
    Jesse
Comment from Janet Foor
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An excellent philosophy Jesse. Each one teach one!
Wouldn't the world be a better place if we all adopted your mantra.

Great picot compliment your poem as well.
Well done Jesse

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Agreed, the world would be a better place if we adapted my mantra, each one teach one.
    Thanks for the blessings.
    Jesse
Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor
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Jesse, I hear you!! Great poem. Much wisdom can be gained through your words. It takes a lot of courage to lead, but the benefits and rewards are worth taking on the responsibility. Take care, Daniel

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thanks, Daniel, for your encouraging review.
    Agreed, it takes a lot of courage to lead, but the benefits for everyone work wonders. The rewards outweigh the risks making it worth taking.
    Enjoy the evening.
    Jesse
Comment from DonandVicki
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I get the feeling from your well composed poem that we need to pass on to the next generation the knowledge that we have gained in our lifetime. To hoard knowledge is a sin.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    You are correct. We must pass on our knowledge to the next generation. Hoarding knowledge may not be a sin but it is wasteful.
    Thanks for your provocative review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement.
    Jesse
Comment from Nicki.B
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This a an excellent philosophical poem which conveys a great message. I really enjoyed this and the image was beautiful. Gives lovely positive vibes to the theme. Well done and thanks for sharing. We for sure can all learn a thing or two from one another, and open up to share knowledge wouldn't that be amazing
Best Wishes
Nicky

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024