2024 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "a Windy Night"x
8 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I can see that the bunny is prominent here, though I am drawn to thinking it is the monsters under his bed that are keeping him from sleep, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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I can see that the bunny is prominent here, though I am drawn to thinking it is the monsters under his bed that are keeping him from sleep, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I've known a lot of people who struggle falling asleep. I'm a lucky one and always go right to sleep. I know not sleeping is a real problem. Your poem is excellent as is your presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I've known a lot of people who struggle falling asleep. I'm a lucky one and always go right to sleep. I know not sleeping is a real problem. Your poem is excellent as is your presentation.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I have had insomnia since I was little.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This brings back memories of my own childhood when sleep eluded me. Many a night, my imagination took command. String and very relatable imagery. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This brings back memories of my own childhood when sleep eluded me. Many a night, my imagination took command. String and very relatable imagery. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy...oddly enough, I too count the bunnys who live under my bed. They ain't dust bunnies though, they're Playboy bunnies, but close enough!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy...oddly enough, I too count the bunnys who live under my bed. They ain't dust bunnies though, they're Playboy bunnies, but close enough!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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LoL too much information.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Sorry!
Comment from shelley kaye
aww cute little dust bunny hopping along. . .
everyone needs a home!
great gogyhoka about not being able to sleep. . .
good imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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aww cute little dust bunny hopping along. . .
everyone needs a home!
great gogyhoka about not being able to sleep. . .
good imagistic word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Oh boy, he probably doesn't want to count the dust bunnies under my bed. I can never get my vacuum under there. A fun poem and more interesting than counting sheep!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Lol. Oh boy, he probably doesn't want to count the dust bunnies under my bed. I can never get my vacuum under there. A fun poem and more interesting than counting sheep!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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LoL me neither.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, big sister.
Love,
Marival .
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I've never heard of dust bunnies but they make me smile and would be a lovely distraction for a child unable to sleep because of that angry wind. A delightful gogyohka! Thank you Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I've never heard of dust bunnies but they make me smile and would be a lovely distraction for a child unable to sleep because of that angry wind. A delightful gogyohka! Thank you Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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We call dust bunnies to the balls of dust and hair.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Julie Helms
I thought we were headed toward horror talking about wind outside and things playing under the bed. The dust bunnies were a cute surprise!
This is an unfamiliar form of poetry for me, so I appreciated the explanation. I enjoyed your whole presentation.
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I thought we were headed toward horror talking about wind outside and things playing under the bed. The dust bunnies were a cute surprise!
This is an unfamiliar form of poetry for me, so I appreciated the explanation. I enjoyed your whole presentation.
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊