Crucible of suffering
A poem5 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
There's definitely no way I could do that, especially for the way people are today. I'm thankful that Christ did what he did for us so that we could be with him in eternity. Nice poetry! It still rings true today.
I don't know if you meant to have the word "in" two times in a row on this sentence
...and clothe me in (in ) your royal robes?
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There's definitely no way I could do that, especially for the way people are today. I'm thankful that Christ did what he did for us so that we could be with him in eternity. Nice poetry! It still rings true today.
I don't know if you meant to have the word "in" two times in a row on this sentence
...and clothe me in (in ) your royal robes?
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
Comment from Begin Again
"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life" That says it all, Roy. No other would do the same to save mankind. I've been blessed so many times.
smiles, Carol
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"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life" That says it all, Roy. No other would do the same to save mankind. I've been blessed so many times.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
Hey Roy, I absolutely love, and agree with, your admiration and, I think, overwhelmed feeling that we get as we ponder the Savior's sacrifice for US!
You have some typos:
Could uo leave the halls of Heaven,
(you)
In your lackyour love forbearing,
(Needs a space)
though Lord ot all my stench you berar?
(to....bear)
flesh from boneyour torn and beeding?
(Needs space)
Can youlove me, nevewr gaining,
(Needs space, never)
Could you always off favour,
(offer?)
while your rejected onc again?
(you're, once)
I'd be happy to bump the rating up on this. It's a powerful poem worth the polish!
Julie
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Hey Roy, I absolutely love, and agree with, your admiration and, I think, overwhelmed feeling that we get as we ponder the Savior's sacrifice for US!
You have some typos:
Could uo leave the halls of Heaven,
(you)
In your lackyour love forbearing,
(Needs a space)
though Lord ot all my stench you berar?
(to....bear)
flesh from boneyour torn and beeding?
(Needs space)
Can youlove me, nevewr gaining,
(Needs space, never)
Could you always off favour,
(offer?)
while your rejected onc again?
(you're, once)
I'd be happy to bump the rating up on this. It's a powerful poem worth the polish!
Julie
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think the computer messed up your text on here. There were words that were merged and a few words missing consonants and vowels. But aside from that, the whole thing made think. Would I have done what Jesus did? would I have said forget it? He took on the world and got no thank yous. He did what he was born to do. Die for our sins and our eternal life. Beautifully written. Gretchen
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I think the computer messed up your text on here. There were words that were merged and a few words missing consonants and vowels. But aside from that, the whole thing made think. Would I have done what Jesus did? would I have said forget it? He took on the world and got no thank yous. He did what he was born to do. Die for our sins and our eternal life. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
God's infinite love is amazing. I too cannot comprehend the amount of grace He has given me over the years. Well written as always, Roy. I enjoy every poem.
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God's infinite love is amazing. I too cannot comprehend the amount of grace He has given me over the years. Well written as always, Roy. I enjoy every poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024