Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Chapter 27 C Willing Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Sorry this is so late. I really enjoyed this chapter. I can feel the romance running in a different direction. This goes from new love to forever love. I am so enjoying this story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Sorry this is so late. I really enjoyed this chapter. I can feel the romance running in a different direction. This goes from new love to forever love. I am so enjoying this story. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I understand. This is a very busy time of year.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, I love how things are moving right along. It's hard to believe it has been only a month. Sami story is sweet. I can see why she is the way she is.
I can't wait for the next one. It's easy to read your story because they flow so well with great imagery.
Well done
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Wow, I love how things are moving right along. It's hard to believe it has been only a month. Sami story is sweet. I can see why she is the way she is.
I can't wait for the next one. It's easy to read your story because they flow so well with great imagery.
Well done
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this was one of the more enjoyable chapters in my opinion. I'm kind of scared to see what's going to happen next, but hopefully it will be something good.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this was one of the more enjoyable chapters in my opinion. I'm kind of scared to see what's going to happen next, but hopefully it will be something good.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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There will be a bump in the road. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
Life has been tough for our ancestors, and usually we don't have to go very far back, at all, my parents grew up through the depression, so they were always struggling, my nana had to raise four girls through hard times without a husband, in a very working class city where the many Irish poor, settled in this city bound for other places, but stopped in Liverpool, my home town. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Life has been tough for our ancestors, and usually we don't have to go very far back, at all, my parents grew up through the depression, so they were always struggling, my nana had to raise four girls through hard times without a husband, in a very working class city where the many Irish poor, settled in this city bound for other places, but stopped in Liverpool, my home town. Beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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My parents grew up during the depression too. It was hard on both of them. Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice chapter, Barb. I'm a little worried what might happen in Noah's absence. I guess in the next chapter, I will find out. Marc will probably show up again sometime.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Nice chapter, Barb. I'm a little worried what might happen in Noah's absence. I guess in the next chapter, I will find out. Marc will probably show up again sometime.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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I think we're done with Marc, but something will happen in next chapter. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
A month doesn't seem very long for everlasting love to develop, but those things happen. I liked the story of the sapphire ring and Sami's grandparents. Noah wonders if he's up to maintaining the standards Sami's family did, as he grew up under different circumstances. Sami wants to jump in and do everything, but I like Noah's insistence that they're going to have a real date, meaning going to a restaurant, maybe a play. Things have been going at a leisurely pace, but I feel there will be another disruption coming. judi
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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A month doesn't seem very long for everlasting love to develop, but those things happen. I liked the story of the sapphire ring and Sami's grandparents. Noah wonders if he's up to maintaining the standards Sami's family did, as he grew up under different circumstances. Sami wants to jump in and do everything, but I like Noah's insistence that they're going to have a real date, meaning going to a restaurant, maybe a play. Things have been going at a leisurely pace, but I feel there will be another disruption coming. judi
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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There is a bump in the road coming up. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. I figured something was in the works, partly because Noah was acting a bit mysterious about what he was going to do. judi
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You're welcome. I figured something was in the works, partly because Noah was acting a bit mysterious about what he was going to do. judi
Comment from lyenochka
I guess it will be hard to be away from Noah since she had that intense time with him 24/7 in the safe house. I like how you are showing how both have grown and learned from each other.
One question about this conversation:
"You did what you had to do to protect me, knowing I'd probably hate you."
"You did. I'm grateful you understood and forgave me."
It sounds odd to answer with another "You did" here. What did Noah mean?
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I guess it will be hard to be away from Noah since she had that intense time with him 24/7 in the safe house. I like how you are showing how both have grown and learned from each other.
One question about this conversation:
"You did what you had to do to protect me, knowing I'd probably hate you."
"You did. I'm grateful you understood and forgave me."
It sounds odd to answer with another "You did" here. What did Noah mean?
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Sami did hate Noah for a while. I'll remove the second You did. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
As always, this is a great chapter. I always look forward to the next chapter. You used great descriptive words and really good dialogue. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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As always, this is a great chapter. I always look forward to the next chapter. You used great descriptive words and really good dialogue. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from nomi338
Something she probably did not think of is that if Noah had stayed things may have gotten out of hand and they may have gone too far too soon. Noah is level headed and he appears to be moving at a safe speed so that their relationship proceeds at just the right speed. He is a good and wise man.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Something she probably did not think of is that if Noah had stayed things may have gotten out of hand and they may have gone too far too soon. Noah is level headed and he appears to be moving at a safe speed so that their relationship proceeds at just the right speed. He is a good and wise man.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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We'll find out in the next post why Noah left. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This chapter is really centered around the heart to heart talk between Sami and Noah, where the readers get this background into her family, and how that has become such a foundation on which her life and character is built. It seems a bit intimidating to Noah, who wonders to her if he can live up to her expectations of family life with him, but she seems convinced that his character and heart will carry him through. estory
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This chapter is really centered around the heart to heart talk between Sami and Noah, where the readers get this background into her family, and how that has become such a foundation on which her life and character is built. It seems a bit intimidating to Noah, who wonders to her if he can live up to her expectations of family life with him, but she seems convinced that his character and heart will carry him through. estory
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.