Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you have your first vote!

I love the pretty picture you painted of Spring in Korea.

Those crimson cherry blossoms must be quite a sight to behold and their scent .

I have a friend that suffers from hay fever, she constantly has a tissue in her hand and her nose is like Rudolph's.

PS: the young ladies are students?

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

"Blowings in from China" maybe a typo here, (blowing in...) I love the way you have portrayed the good and the bad in this beautifully honest poem, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024

thanks a lot I will fix the typo

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really like how your poem shares the beauty of Korea's spring and fall seasons. I could see the blooming cherry trees and hear the birds chirping.
I can almost feel the warmth of spring and the crispness of fall in your words. Great job bringing the setting to life! Keep it up!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024

thanks a lot