Reawakening
Questioning mother earth7 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
the correct syllable count and topic.
-You wrote a very good question
about leaves and where they go.
-A very good answer with
effective imagery about
things that are reborn.
-A very good concluding line, as well.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
the correct syllable count and topic.
-You wrote a very good question
about leaves and where they go.
-A very good answer with
effective imagery about
things that are reborn.
-A very good concluding line, as well.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Thank you for reply and comments. Always look forward to here from someone that helps to inspire me to capture the moments, in all the beauty that I receive from another. Happy Holidays. Shadrach
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply. Happy Holidays to you, too.
Comment from karenina
What an interesting firm which you've mastered beautifully! You have a universal nature seen and yet metaphorically there is the story of salvation and rebirth!
Fine work!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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What an interesting firm which you've mastered beautifully! You have a universal nature seen and yet metaphorically there is the story of salvation and rebirth!
Fine work!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you. I always love to hear from you. Your kind words and beautiful spirit lifts the day that I may walk with my lord to follow this path today. My lord shows all life before me, knowing that I grow with a will greater than mine alone.
May your day be filled with sunshine and rays of light to bring all peace and love to you. Always grateful for your replies, Shadrach
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And this is exactly why I am your fan! I always love to hear from you too!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for participating in the Japanese Poetry Club Mondo Poem event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. I love the theme ... it's very Zen style.
Good job,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for participating in the Japanese Poetry Club Mondo Poem event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. I love the theme ... it's very Zen style.
Good job,
Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your reply. Looking forward to participating in more events to come. Shadrach
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your Mondo poem beautifully captures the cycle of life and the wisdom found in nature. The question and answer format is thoughtfully crafted, reflecting a deep understanding and respect for the natural world. The imagery of leaves and rebirth is both soothing and profound, embodying the essence of Zen philosophy.
It's wonderful to see how you express such meaningful concepts through this poetic form
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Your Mondo poem beautifully captures the cycle of life and the wisdom found in nature. The question and answer format is thoughtfully crafted, reflecting a deep understanding and respect for the natural world. The imagery of leaves and rebirth is both soothing and profound, embodying the essence of Zen philosophy.
It's wonderful to see how you express such meaningful concepts through this poetic form
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. There always welcomed with open arms and eyes to see what mother earth has to offer. Thanks again and may you have a blessed day. Shadrach
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Take care
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This poem is a very unique and beautiful tribute to Fall. It's very well written as well. Good luck with this poem and thanks for sharing. Happy writing!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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This poem is a very unique and beautiful tribute to Fall. It's very well written as well. Good luck with this poem and thanks for sharing. Happy writing!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and the reply. May we all find peace today to see all before us, truly to embrace life's beauty from our mother earth. Shadrach
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful reflection on the circle of life in the natural world... Good use of the Mondo poem here! ;) Thanx for sharing your pen with us today! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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A wonderful reflection on the circle of life in the natural world... Good use of the Mondo poem here! ;) Thanx for sharing your pen with us today! ;) ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and always appreciate thoughts and wisdom from another. May we all stay warm and grateful for the days to come.
Comment from Nicki.B
I have never seen a Mondo poem before. So thanks a lot for introducing me to it!
I must say really enjoyed this this where there is a question/answer scenario and you did a great job too. What an interesting question and excellent answer. A poem of positivity and hope, well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I have never seen a Mondo poem before. So thanks a lot for introducing me to it!
I must say really enjoyed this this where there is a question/answer scenario and you did a great job too. What an interesting question and excellent answer. A poem of positivity and hope, well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your reply. I do find it comforting to review all new works to shine new light. Especially, when I'm not feeling the words to write. I appreciate all your thoughts and kind words to keep writing on. Happy Holidays Shadrach
