Reflections
A biographic story of the worst night of my life2 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your piece is incredibly intense and evocative, capturing the raw and harrowing experience of a near-death encounter. The vivid descriptions and emotional depth make it a powerful read, immersing the reader in the protagonist's turmoil and eventual realization of the love and support around them.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Your piece is incredibly intense and evocative, capturing the raw and harrowing experience of a near-death encounter. The vivid descriptions and emotional depth make it a powerful read, immersing the reader in the protagonist's turmoil and eventual realization of the love and support around them.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for such a kind review.
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Take care and stay safe
Comment from pome lover
Well, that was graphic and sad, with one horrible nurse - I guess she was a nurse. I'm glad your loved ones came through for you.
Did you really use a knife on yourself? Scary stuff! Well, you can write about it, realistically, so you must be in a good place to be able to do that.
A brave admission for this contest. Good luck.
Katharine
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Well, that was graphic and sad, with one horrible nurse - I guess she was a nurse. I'm glad your loved ones came through for you.
Did you really use a knife on yourself? Scary stuff! Well, you can write about it, realistically, so you must be in a good place to be able to do that.
A brave admission for this contest. Good luck.
Katharine
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I tried to capture the feeling of not being able to recall what really happened and what was a fragment of my addled brain. The knife was used excessively but pills are what put me in that position. Thank you for a good review.