The Dead Man's Hand
You can't turn your back on fate.2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
It is an interesting western, historical and perhaps science fiction story, all rolled into one. I think the voters will find it unique. I do have three small suggestions:
1) Add spacing between your paragraphs.
2) Increase the font size
3) This seems to be very dialogue heavy. Are you sure about that?
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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It is an interesting western, historical and perhaps science fiction story, all rolled into one. I think the voters will find it unique. I do have three small suggestions:
1) Add spacing between your paragraphs.
2) Increase the font size
3) This seems to be very dialogue heavy. Are you sure about that?
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the suggestions. I've always had problems with the fonts, etc... on this site. And yep, I live for dialogue but I'll work on that too. Thanks again!
Comment from Julie G1
Well written. This story expresses a great and effective theme, appropriate to the genre, true to the Western tales. The writer has selected apt language and credible dialogues, centered around such legendary characters. Overall, worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Well written. This story expresses a great and effective theme, appropriate to the genre, true to the Western tales. The writer has selected apt language and credible dialogues, centered around such legendary characters. Overall, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the comments!
