Ah, To Be Needed!
a senryu about birds2 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
It's nice to feel needed and birds during the winter definitely need you to fill their bird feeders. I love the artwork as it adds a visual to the senryu to carry the reader through to the positive ending. Feeling needed and wanted is a fantastic thing!
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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It's nice to feel needed and birds during the winter definitely need you to fill their bird feeders. I love the artwork as it adds a visual to the senryu to carry the reader through to the positive ending. Feeling needed and wanted is a fantastic thing!
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Indeed it is, Jake. Many thanks for your review and comments.
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My name is Jesse, not Jake.
We appear to have birds in common.
How do you do?
Jesse
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Sorry, Jesse. The birds truly needed me today. Cold and snow on the ground.
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Thanks for getting my name right.
I'm glad you are there for the birds.
I live on the West Coast and it is 56 degrees right now. Warm and muggy.
I like where I live better than snow and cold winter days and nights.
Jesse
Comment from Beejay
A delightful Senryu....not an easy verse to do I expect, having to continually count the syllables. Beautifully presented too. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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A delightful Senryu....not an easy verse to do I expect, having to continually count the syllables. Beautifully presented too. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Beejay.