Centerpiece
Image inspired poem24 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
There are lots of poem about Jesus but yours stands out for originality.
I love the opening phrase and in my mind, I picture a bright beam of light coming from the center of an oval table that embraces everyone.
I also love the phrase :
There is sweet fragrance in His presence
as He shares the joy of love.
Love the unique choice of words.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
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Ciao!
There are lots of poem about Jesus but yours stands out for originality.
I love the opening phrase and in my mind, I picture a bright beam of light coming from the center of an oval table that embraces everyone.
I also love the phrase :
There is sweet fragrance in His presence
as He shares the joy of love.
Love the unique choice of words.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. And for the six stars.
Comment from estory
I like how you make Jesus the centerpiece of the Christmas celebration. So often today we get distracted by all the gift buying and the decorating that the world of commerce shoves in our face. I like the way you used the form to create a focal point, like the advent candle becomes a focal point on the table. estory
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I like how you make Jesus the centerpiece of the Christmas celebration. So often today we get distracted by all the gift buying and the decorating that the world of commerce shoves in our face. I like the way you used the form to create a focal point, like the advent candle becomes a focal point on the table. estory
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I always appreciate these nice reviews thank you
Comment from fm wright
It seems like you have used centerpiece as a metaphor for Jesus being the center of our lives. Indeed He is the light of the world. Beautifully portrayed. The image fits your words so very well.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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It seems like you have used centerpiece as a metaphor for Jesus being the center of our lives. Indeed He is the light of the world. Beautifully portrayed. The image fits your words so very well.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mintybee
I like how you wrote a lovely poem to accompany this lovely picture. You make the metaphor without it being overdone: Jesus, like the candle, is light and sweet and central. I think you did really well with this poem. Merry Christmas!
Mintybee
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I like how you wrote a lovely poem to accompany this lovely picture. You make the metaphor without it being overdone: Jesus, like the candle, is light and sweet and central. I think you did really well with this poem. Merry Christmas!
Mintybee
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from judiverse
Thanks so much for your review and comments. What a wonderful idea about God being the centerpiece at the Christmas table. The reference to fragrance is quite fitting, as we like candles because of their fragrance. Interesting format. judi
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. What a wonderful idea about God being the centerpiece at the Christmas table. The reference to fragrance is quite fitting, as we like candles because of their fragrance. Interesting format. judi
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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I am grateful when I get nice reviews such as this thank you so much
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You're very welcome. It's encouraging to get those good reviews. judi
Comment from lyenochka
Amen! May we keep Jesus the center of each day. It's so easy to get distracted by the many things we moms have to do to prepare for the celebration and we forget the most important part is Jesus Who came to save us!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Amen! May we keep Jesus the center of each day. It's so easy to get distracted by the many things we moms have to do to prepare for the celebration and we forget the most important part is Jesus Who came to save us!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from DonandVicki
I actually like your poem without rhyme or meter. It speaks loudly of the true reason of the Christmas spirit, instead of the commercialism that blinds the world.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I actually like your poem without rhyme or meter. It speaks loudly of the true reason of the Christmas spirit, instead of the commercialism that blinds the world.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Gorgeous image and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-Effective imagery and positive messages.
-Very good opening lines with the
comparison to "the centerpiece.
-You follow that well with how
Jesus "holds all things together."
-Very good closing lines with
images of joy and peace.
-Very well done.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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-Gorgeous image and nice presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good poem.
-Effective imagery and positive messages.
-Very good opening lines with the
comparison to "the centerpiece.
-You follow that well with how
Jesus "holds all things together."
-Very good closing lines with
images of joy and peace.
-Very well done.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your very kind. Review is very much appreciated
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You are very welcome.
Comment from ESOSTINE
This poem captures the real essence of Christmas, love and joy, centred around Jesus Christ the messiah. Well done, dear Pat for sharing your bible-inspired poem. Have a merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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This poem captures the real essence of Christmas, love and joy, centred around Jesus Christ the messiah. Well done, dear Pat for sharing your bible-inspired poem. Have a merry Christmas.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Thank you for sharing these true words of Jesus Christ, or rat h er these true words that highlight how much he has done and keeps doing for us. I hope you are having a great day
RJ
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing these true words of Jesus Christ, or rat h er these true words that highlight how much he has done and keeps doing for us. I hope you are having a great day
RJ
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind. Review is very much appreciate.