Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. It's funny that at the end you say someone's missing, but you don't say who. This poem flows nicely to completion.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
Thank you very much, Cecilia.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 23-Dec-2024
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
You certainly know how to attract attention to the post! All was looking fun and humorous but now I'm a bit worried about what has happened to the fifth person. I don't think the others care, though, so we're alright! Nicely done! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
Thank you so much, Debbie.