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Pedal Power Patrol

An arresting dilemma

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Comment from jaded831
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Truly a fun poem. I could picture this in my mind. A three hundred pound criminal sitting in a basket and the cops standing by. Thank the heavens for radios. Happy holidays.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Your review is delightful and captures the humor of the poem perfectly! The image of a three hundred pound criminal sitting in a basket with the cops standing by is both vivid and hilarious. Your mention of radios adds a clever, modern touch that enhances the scene even further.
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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What a great humorous 5-7-5. It is funny to think a bicycle cop would arrest someone and make them go in a basket. That would be too funny to see.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Your lovely review captures the essence of the humour perfectly! The imagery of a bicycle cop arresting someone and making them get into a basket is indeed comical and silly. Your feedback is both appreciative and encouraging, highlighting the humour of this silly piece.
    Bless you and stay safe.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 24-Dec-2024
    You're welcome and you stay Blessed