Loss of Oracle
More than comrades, less than Family15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Loss of Oracle, truly eludes my ability to understand the motivation or story within the verse created within this poetic stanza...........
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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This poem, Loss of Oracle, truly eludes my ability to understand the motivation or story within the verse created within this poetic stanza...........
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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Bill, Debbie D' Arcy, one of FS most talented members is leaving, and ir will
Leave a void ...I hope that she'd some night on the "loss..."
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
teafor2,
This is a very interesting poem. Not exactly sure what this poem is saying. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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teafor2,
This is a very interesting poem. Not exactly sure what this poem is saying. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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Cecilia, Debbie D' Arcy, one of FS most talented members is leaving and it
Will leave a void...I hope that helps explain this write.
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Yes it does. I know Debbie she has helped me along the way.
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:-)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi tea for 2,
Our angst musings isnsuch a unique line. It sets the tension of the piece that is in stark contrast to the bewilderment felt in your other lines. Nice work.
Kim
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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Hi tea for 2,
Our angst musings isnsuch a unique line. It sets the tension of the piece that is in stark contrast to the bewilderment felt in your other lines. Nice work.
Kim
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your excellent discernment and personal remarks. Your response
Is appreciated Kim. teafor2
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This has a dream like quality to it, also a bit unsettling and haunting- kinda like watching a good psychological thriller! Well done!
My favorite part though, is your description "more than comrades, less than family ". It describes the "situationship" situation very well (if you know what I mean lol)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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This has a dream like quality to it, also a bit unsettling and haunting- kinda like watching a good psychological thriller! Well done!
My favorite part though, is your description "more than comrades, less than family ". It describes the "situationship" situation very well (if you know what I mean lol)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful review...Your personal remarks are appreciated. teafor2
Comment from Karen Cherry
The picture is nice, You can also get free pictures from Google, Bing, stock and Pinterest among others. Just put where you get your picture from in your authors notes. You have this poetry form down pat. What will you chhose next? Try the "Limericky". I made it years ago. It is like a Limerick , only you do not have to follow strict meter and your don't have to perfectly rhyme.
I love all your writings you see
But they would mean much more to me
If they were my style
Try it a while
Really, how hard could it be?
They are fun. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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The picture is nice, You can also get free pictures from Google, Bing, stock and Pinterest among others. Just put where you get your picture from in your authors notes. You have this poetry form down pat. What will you chhose next? Try the "Limericky". I made it years ago. It is like a Limerick , only you do not have to follow strict meter and your don't have to perfectly rhyme.
I love all your writings you see
But they would mean much more to me
If they were my style
Try it a while
Really, how hard could it be?
They are fun. Karen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your review, thoughtful suggestions and personal remarks
Your response is appreciated. teafor2
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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem reminds us that some people have more effect on our lives than we think. It is only realized after they leave us.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Hi
This poem reminds us that some people have more effect on our lives than we think. It is only realized after they leave us.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful remarks and personal comments. teafor2
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My pleasure, teafor2.
Joan
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Comment from Harry Craft
Very cool poem. I enjoyed reading it and I truly liked it too. I love the artwork that goes with the poem, that is such a cool picture too. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Very cool poem. I enjoyed reading it and I truly liked it too. I love the artwork that goes with the poem, that is such a cool picture too. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your personal remarks and shared sentiments. teafor2
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You are so welcome!
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:-)
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:-) :-)
Comment from njcoleman
I had to read and reread and reread again and, after referring back to the title, it clicked! As Watson would say, "By God, Holmes, I think I see it now!".
And like the great thrillers in literature, your meaning is shrouded in mystery!
Very well done, TF2!
And, a side note, what is considered the first detective novel was published on this date in 1841. Hmmm...
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I had to read and reread and reread again and, after referring back to the title, it clicked! As Watson would say, "By God, Holmes, I think I see it now!".
And like the great thrillers in literature, your meaning is shrouded in mystery!
Very well done, TF2!
And, a side note, what is considered the first detective novel was published on this date in 1841. Hmmm...
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks for sticking with your guns, your personal remarks and generous rating. Your review is appreciated. teafor2
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written, and it was a pleasure to read. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day. And I will also wish you a wonderful week with your musings. Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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This is well written, and it was a pleasure to read. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day. And I will also wish you a wonderful week with your musings. Patricia
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Patricia, thanks for your personal comments and thoughtful remarks.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm wondering what musings about what angst? Is this for several of our members who are temporarily leaving Fanstory like Debbie and Sandra? Thank you for sharing another well done rondelet!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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I'm wondering what musings about what angst? Is this for several of our members who are temporarily leaving Fanstory like Debbie and Sandra? Thank you for sharing another well done rondelet!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Iyenochka, thanks for your shared sentiments, personal comments and too true remarks. teafor2
