The Sanguine Interlude
Vampire, what is new?18 total reviews
Comment from Fluffyhead
I was expecting Twilight and got a old black and white horror movie instead. It gave me chills. This is a good thing!!!!! The twist at the end was genius. The italics made this spookier and usually, I don't care for italics. I crave this kind of poetry/story.
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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I was expecting Twilight and got a old black and white horror movie instead. It gave me chills. This is a good thing!!!!! The twist at the end was genius. The italics made this spookier and usually, I don't care for italics. I crave this kind of poetry/story.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Fluffyhead, goodness, thank you ever so much. Where did you find this poem? It has been over a year since it was qwritten and promoted, Again thank you ever so much. A horror movie heh? That has been said of a lot of my poems. I am flattered, truly.. again thank you..jlsavell oh, and welcome to fanstory!!!!
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under the column horror stories it is in red
Comment from Nanashirley
The poem was great and the twist at the end was a wonderful Surprise. The picture is to dark for my eyes. I am told it is very fitting for the poem. I found no place o edit but I did have to reread a couple of places. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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The poem was great and the twist at the end was a wonderful Surprise. The picture is to dark for my eyes. I am told it is very fitting for the poem. I found no place o edit but I did have to reread a couple of places. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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Nanashirley, thank you so very much for stopping by to read nad reiview my work. This work is the dark side of my work..I am usually not wso diabolical..lol..again thank you so very very much..jlsavell
Comment from Nicki_Mist
You deserve a six star rating on this great poem. The imagery was to die for ( pun intended LOL). I was surprised at the end that he did that every year. Great metaphors and being creative. Keep writing like this. No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest.
Nicole
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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You deserve a six star rating on this great poem. The imagery was to die for ( pun intended LOL). I was surprised at the end that he did that every year. Great metaphors and being creative. Keep writing like this. No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest.
Nicole
Comment Written 08-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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Nicki-Mist. first of all I must apologize for just responding. This review really lit up my day . I admire your wrok immensely and to get an exceptional from you is most humbling. again thank you so very very much..jlsavell
Comment from Kaladore
I thought that this was an amazing poem. The story is haunting and portrayed with excellent imagery and a good smooth flow. It has its twists and turns with a memorable ending. Bravo!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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I thought that this was an amazing poem. The story is haunting and portrayed with excellent imagery and a good smooth flow. It has its twists and turns with a memorable ending. Bravo!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2010
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Kaladore, first of all I must start out by apologizing for just responding top this exceptional review. I am truly humbled. Truly. I am thrilled you enjoyed my offering so much..again thank you so very much!!! jlsavell
Comment from chaswriter
Jimi - Congratulations on winning 2nd place in this contest. You should have won in my humble opinion. You sure do tell a heck of a story in rhyme along with the smooth flow in the cadence. Great job.
Charlie
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Jimi - Congratulations on winning 2nd place in this contest. You should have won in my humble opinion. You sure do tell a heck of a story in rhyme along with the smooth flow in the cadence. Great job.
Charlie
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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charlie!! sorry I am replying so very late. Thank you so very much my wonderful friend. I appreciate you so. Your humble opinion huh??? No really I am honored to be considered at all..especially with Brooke and Wayne[Hitcher]..again thank you so very much..jimi
Comment from adewpearl
Oh, the cowardly knight was actually working for the prince of darkness, luring the maiden into the woods so his master could siphon her soul - what a cad. Great abab rhyming and alliteration and wonderful descriptive detail - I was really in the middle of this scene in the deep of the black forest with its raging thunder and wailing sounds. What a dark and tragic story. Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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Oh, the cowardly knight was actually working for the prince of darkness, luring the maiden into the woods so his master could siphon her soul - what a cad. Great abab rhyming and alliteration and wonderful descriptive detail - I was really in the middle of this scene in the deep of the black forest with its raging thunder and wailing sounds. What a dark and tragic story. Brooke
Comment Written 09-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2010
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adewpearl, thank you so very much..I am thrilled you enjoyed my dark tale..my year would not be complete without some sort of dark tale..lol....jimi
Comment from grassroots08
This gives one pause - to maybe never trust even a faithful companion. It didn't see the girl's lover as the culprit 'til the end. Should I have seen it coming? I really didn't! Great cover up. Cheers, Don
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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This gives one pause - to maybe never trust even a faithful companion. It didn't see the girl's lover as the culprit 'til the end. Should I have seen it coming? I really didn't! Great cover up. Cheers, Don
Comment Written 29-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Don, once again a bigggggg apology for just responding. I appreciate you so very much..jimi
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Have you seen my latest story out of portugal at www.floydthedog.com? It is a bear story. Cheers Don
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no but I will go to as soon as I stop reviewing. I see you have a few posted..cannot wait to read..hey by the way..you should go read Father Flaps..you, Don, will enjoy his work..he reminds me of you!!! Go check him out please!!!!
Comment from NightWriter
Bravo! Bravo! "The Sanguine Interlude" pulled me in like a vacuum and held me captivated til the end. Awesome, incredible, OUTSTANDING writing here. Smooth rhythm, perfect rhyming and hypnotic prose. Bravo! SIX STARS, TEN if I could!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2010
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Bravo! Bravo! "The Sanguine Interlude" pulled me in like a vacuum and held me captivated til the end. Awesome, incredible, OUTSTANDING writing here. Smooth rhythm, perfect rhyming and hypnotic prose. Bravo! SIX STARS, TEN if I could!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2010
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Nightwriter, stop it!!! you are going to make my head too big!!! I knew you would like it..for it was right up your alley..the dark seductive sensual alley of vampires...thank you so much..I feel so humbled when you rate my work so highly!!! jimi
Comment from fictionwriter
I loved this dark tale, there's no greater tale than a ghost or moster tale for me. I tend to lean toward the dark side. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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I loved this dark tale, there's no greater tale than a ghost or moster tale for me. I tend to lean toward the dark side. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Kay, another bleated thank you..please forgive me!!!! jimi
Comment from FredCollingwood
Excellent! This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. I love that you took the time to rhyme and balance the meter.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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Excellent! This is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. I love that you took the time to rhyme and balance the meter.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2010
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FredCollingwood, here it is August and I am just responding to this review. IO do so apologize for the delay. My appreciation for your time and your comments are no less appreciated. Thank you very very much. An exceptional coming from you just makes my day..hope you are doing well...jim