Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Fleeting Memories"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from poetbear
I will read all of them when time permits but after the tears dry it will be easier.
These words got to me as a writer and semi-retired Educator.
Great image.
The power of your words and their meaning struck me as masterfully created and crafted.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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I will read all of them when time permits but after the tears dry it will be easier.
These words got to me as a writer and semi-retired Educator.
Great image.
The power of your words and their meaning struck me as masterfully created and crafted.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem reads very innocently, yet it is extremely sensual. You did a good job of writting this poem. It flows very nicely and I didn't stumble over any words.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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This poem reads very innocently, yet it is extremely sensual. You did a good job of writting this poem. It flows very nicely and I didn't stumble over any words.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you barbara for reading
Comment from bluedragon776
Wow. You know, I just read another of your poems. I am impressed how you can write about the swiftness and finality of death this that piece. Then express tender romantic emotions this in piece. I think you did a good job here. I don't know many men who could express such deep romantic thought so well. Good Show.
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Wow. You know, I just read another of your poems. I am impressed how you can write about the swiftness and finality of death this that piece. Then express tender romantic emotions this in piece. I think you did a good job here. I don't know many men who could express such deep romantic thought so well. Good Show.
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thanks again blue
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your welcome
Comment from Orchidea Blu
Romantic, enduring, passionate, flows well, I love it! Especially this part: "So reflect on the moment's that came into your life, the memories of perfection from the wonders of last night" You do good work! Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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Romantic, enduring, passionate, flows well, I love it! Especially this part: "So reflect on the moment's that came into your life, the memories of perfection from the wonders of last night" You do good work! Thank you.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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thank you for reading
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you are very welcome
Comment from enjoi
Another interesting poem of yours. Great imagery, and very well done in all. No mistakes to be found, just an interesting poem about the memories of an evening well spent. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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Another interesting poem of yours. Great imagery, and very well done in all. No mistakes to be found, just an interesting poem about the memories of an evening well spent. Good stuff.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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thank you enjoi
Comment from Mariea
A beautiful piece of writing Gary.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - good easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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A beautiful piece of writing Gary.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - good easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 09-May-2010
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thank you my friend for reading
Comment from Jontae
Good flow of thought and story process throughout. Stirs the romantic emotions of the reader and thoughts of their own past. I liked it.
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Good flow of thought and story process throughout. Stirs the romantic emotions of the reader and thoughts of their own past. I liked it.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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thank you for reading
Comment from P1
i'm wondering where the inspiration came from for this piece... maybe you had a good night last night ha. picture
is lovely, words beautiful free flowing and easy to read.
i really liked this
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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i'm wondering where the inspiration came from for this piece... maybe you had a good night last night ha. picture
is lovely, words beautiful free flowing and easy to read.
i really liked this
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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thank you for reading
Comment from skye
Sensual, real, and filled with a wonderful message.
Enjoy what we have right now, because that is all there is.
Do not live for tomorrow, nor wander into the past. Enjoy this moment.
Excellent. Written in very good taste and poetic language, which is appropriate and can be shared.
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Sensual, real, and filled with a wonderful message.
Enjoy what we have right now, because that is all there is.
Do not live for tomorrow, nor wander into the past. Enjoy this moment.
Excellent. Written in very good taste and poetic language, which is appropriate and can be shared.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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thank you skye
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi deepwater,
The problem in writing a poem about love is so many have come before. But having said that I really like this one. You have rhyme and near rhyme but it works well here. Beautiful words! chey
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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Hi deepwater,
The problem in writing a poem about love is so many have come before. But having said that I really like this one. You have rhyme and near rhyme but it works well here. Beautiful words! chey
Comment Written 08-May-2010
reply by the author on 08-May-2010
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thanks again chey all i can do is try