Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
85 total reviews
Comment from Kaladore
I think this is a good poem that shows a very easy to read message about trusting God no matter what happens. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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I think this is a good poem that shows a very easy to read message about trusting God no matter what happens. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for the review
Comment from midgev
A very sad, beautiful poem especially fitted to memorial day. The repetition of fields of stone make a striking image. God bless the men and women who do and have served. Even the one without injuries are often scarred. Thank you for this tribute to them, nice job.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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A very sad, beautiful poem especially fitted to memorial day. The repetition of fields of stone make a striking image. God bless the men and women who do and have served. Even the one without injuries are often scarred. Thank you for this tribute to them, nice job.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading midgev
Comment from Bellringer
Very good poem about the call to duty. A wonderful commemoration about those who have bravely answered that call and a remembrance of those who have fallen but will not be forgotten. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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Very good poem about the call to duty. A wonderful commemoration about those who have bravely answered that call and a remembrance of those who have fallen but will not be forgotten. Best wishes.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading Bell
Comment from jason456
I wish I had six stars to give you. Your poem is amazing and so extremely well written and descriptive. God Bless You for serving our country and I'm so glad you survived. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Patti :)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I wish I had six stars to give you. Your poem is amazing and so extremely well written and descriptive. God Bless You for serving our country and I'm so glad you survived. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Patti :)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you Patti for your welcome comments Gary
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Gary, it was my pleasure. Patti :)
Comment from jmyron
Well written and a great storyline. Good poems are harder to review than those of lessor skill - less to complain about. You might like my book of poems 'Patriotism.' It is as work in progress.
John
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Well written and a great storyline. Good poems are harder to review than those of lessor skill - less to complain about. You might like my book of poems 'Patriotism.' It is as work in progress.
John
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you Jm for reading
Comment from Steven Dee
I've read a hell of a lot of poems on this site, and this one is the best by a mile. Or should that be kilometer??! Keep up the great words!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I've read a hell of a lot of poems on this site, and this one is the best by a mile. Or should that be kilometer??! Keep up the great words!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you Steven miles is ok
Comment from Amina Ahmed
exceptional in one word. its definitely GOD who controls everything and we all have have to bow and return to him. God bless all of us. keep it up and take care
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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exceptional in one word. its definitely GOD who controls everything and we all have have to bow and return to him. God bless all of us. keep it up and take care
Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome comments and reading Amina
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have a very well written poem on your hands. I enjoyed reading it, although the subject matter wasn't enjoyable. The poem flowed nicely.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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You have a very well written poem on your hands. I enjoyed reading it, although the subject matter wasn't enjoyable. The poem flowed nicely.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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thank you again barbara for reading this GW
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Nicely done GW, I enjoyed reading your poem. The soldiers concerns and fears are stated very well as he prepares for war. He knows there is a good possibility he may not survive as he cries out for help. This has given me a good feel from a soldiers perpective. Very good writing! Best regards, Warren
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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Nicely done GW, I enjoyed reading your poem. The soldiers concerns and fears are stated very well as he prepares for war. He knows there is a good possibility he may not survive as he cries out for help. This has given me a good feel from a soldiers perpective. Very good writing! Best regards, Warren
Comment Written 01-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2010
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thank you for reading warren
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
I liked your connectivity in the lines, the poetic style varies and meter looks fine.
We are the ones, who made the call
As fields of stone remember the past
The names of the fallen will always last[ Enjoyed these lines]
K
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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I liked your connectivity in the lines, the poetic style varies and meter looks fine.
We are the ones, who made the call
As fields of stone remember the past
The names of the fallen will always last[ Enjoyed these lines]
K
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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thank for reading K