Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Tears"A book of Poetry & Writing
9 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
We have cried our share since January 2014.
Death in our family followed by five friend's losing their parents.
Lost a close friend in March.
So seven funerals.
This write gets us the most!
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We have cried our share since January 2014.
Death in our family followed by five friend's losing their parents.
Lost a close friend in March.
So seven funerals.
This write gets us the most!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
Comment from Dom G Robles
Deepwater, your poem is excellent. Tears in many wondrous meanings and manifestations. I like best the part when you said, "Tears from the mother, her soldier dead--Tears from the heavens as angels look on--Tears make us human God's gift to us all" Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Deepwater, your poem is excellent. Tears in many wondrous meanings and manifestations. I like best the part when you said, "Tears from the mother, her soldier dead--Tears from the heavens as angels look on--Tears make us human God's gift to us all" Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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thank you Don GW
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
SOMEONE is feeling sad. Is that a tear I see deepwater? Well- I don't believe Angels cry (no tears in heaven?) But yes, we cry our way though life- but thank goodness, there's a smile or two in there as well. Smiles to you my brother! Only smiles. Betty
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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SOMEONE is feeling sad. Is that a tear I see deepwater? Well- I don't believe Angels cry (no tears in heaven?) But yes, we cry our way though life- but thank goodness, there's a smile or two in there as well. Smiles to you my brother! Only smiles. Betty
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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thank you betty for reading
Comment from Pili Pubul
How true, even if my eyes remind dry now often , I think the tears joined the sea. Good poem my friend, but had to put my glasses to read, the writing is a bit small. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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How true, even if my eyes remind dry now often , I think the tears joined the sea. Good poem my friend, but had to put my glasses to read, the writing is a bit small. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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thank you again Pili
Comment from kintesiegel
this is good and your work in general is getting better and better. always was interesting but now even more so. this is a great website isn't it?
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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this is good and your work in general is getting better and better. always was interesting but now even more so. this is a great website isn't it?
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thanks kintesiegel for reading
Comment from Ponder
Hi Deepwater,
This is a simple poem, but it has a deep message, behind every door there is a tragedy, tears are indeed very human.
A nicely formed poem, the repetition makes it read almost like a nursery rhyme. Very poignant.
Jules
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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Hi Deepwater,
This is a simple poem, but it has a deep message, behind every door there is a tragedy, tears are indeed very human.
A nicely formed poem, the repetition makes it read almost like a nursery rhyme. Very poignant.
Jules
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thank you Jules
Comment from c_lucas
It has been said that tears binds the body with the soul. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. Charlie.
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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It has been said that tears binds the body with the soul. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. Charlie.
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thanks again Charlies
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
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thank you charlie
Comment from Peter@Poole
This was an unusual poem, full of tender images, and I enjoyed it immensely. It rhymed well and I think you could have made it even longer. Peter
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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This was an unusual poem, full of tender images, and I enjoyed it immensely. It rhymed well and I think you could have made it even longer. Peter
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thank you peter for reading GW
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good meter, good form, good flow, wonderful depiction of the different reasons we cry and we must also remember the tears God weeps when we do wrong and stray from Him
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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this is very well written with good meter, good form, good flow, wonderful depiction of the different reasons we cry and we must also remember the tears God weeps when we do wrong and stray from Him
Comment Written 11-May-2010
reply by the author on 11-May-2010
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thank you Sweet for reading GW