I Reach For You
In The Silence Of The Night14 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author,
Maybe it's exactly how your special someone says your name. Perhaps, your loved one has a voice you would know anywhere? Complex is intriguing but simplicity is easy to love. A soft and sweet love poem.
Good luck in the contest. Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Hello author,
Maybe it's exactly how your special someone says your name. Perhaps, your loved one has a voice you would know anywhere? Complex is intriguing but simplicity is easy to love. A soft and sweet love poem.
Good luck in the contest. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 22-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Comment from Mary's angel
I like the fact that it is in fifteen words and also that it does relay a feeling. I am not certain how ever that that feeling is love. Still well penned. Mary's angel
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reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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I like the fact that it is in fifteen words and also that it does relay a feeling. I am not certain how ever that that feeling is love. Still well penned. Mary's angel
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Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 22-May-2010
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Thanks for stopping by and love is spoken in many ways, by whispers, by words that are not said, maybe a smile, a turn of the head.
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Still, a very good poem. I was just seeking something more powerful in 15 lines. And I do agree with what you said.
Blessings,
Mary
Comment from PUPA
Yes, why her? sometimes a different accent in pronouncing a name makes it very special. A short and sweet love poem.
Good luck with this one.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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Yes, why her? sometimes a different accent in pronouncing a name makes it very special. A short and sweet love poem.
Good luck with this one.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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Comment from azwildrosa
why you? i love it. the prefect question for the ones that capture us. the moonlight,...say my name. what a beautiful way to express the crazy emotions of love. great writing prompt. best wishes to ya! :)
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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why you? i love it. the prefect question for the ones that capture us. the moonlight,...say my name. what a beautiful way to express the crazy emotions of love. great writing prompt. best wishes to ya! :)
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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Comment from wierdgrace
this is hard to do, I know I tried and gave up, you did perfect, said so much in the fifteen words or less, no errors and no revisions, thank you so much and wish you lots of luck in votes
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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this is hard to do, I know I tried and gave up, you did perfect, said so much in the fifteen words or less, no errors and no revisions, thank you so much and wish you lots of luck in votes
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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Comment from c_lucas
This is a well written love poem with a very smooth flow of words making a profound statement. Good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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This is a well written love poem with a very smooth flow of words making a profound statement. Good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2010
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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You're welcome.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, wonderful picture. we never know what causes us to fall in love with the one God picked out for us. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 21-May-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow, good meter, wonderful picture. we never know what causes us to fall in love with the one God picked out for us. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-May-2010
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Comment from adewpearl
Perchance, a great word I don't get the chance to read nearly often enough - love the use of questions in this poem - a lovely short love poem from my favorite writer of romantic poetry :-) What is it about moonlight that is so darned romantic, and yes, it's amazing how much better one's name can sound when uttered by just the right person. Brooke
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Perchance, a great word I don't get the chance to read nearly often enough - love the use of questions in this poem - a lovely short love poem from my favorite writer of romantic poetry :-) What is it about moonlight that is so darned romantic, and yes, it's amazing how much better one's name can sound when uttered by just the right person. Brooke
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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Comment from Kingsland
I am not really into these ultra short poetic formats. But I really liked the message in this short piece. It was just a joy to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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I am not really into these ultra short poetic formats. But I really liked the message in this short piece. It was just a joy to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 20-May-2010
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Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is a very sweet poem. It is romantic and expressive in just a few words. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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This is a very sweet poem. It is romantic and expressive in just a few words. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
Comment Written 20-May-2010
reply by the author on 20-May-2010
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You are welcome. Have a blessed day. Marilyn