Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Ghosterb
I love this tribute to the Veterans that have sacrificed so much for our country!
I really like your wording and the structure of your poem.
Very nicely done my friend!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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I love this tribute to the Veterans that have sacrificed so much for our country!
I really like your wording and the structure of your poem.
Very nicely done my friend!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2010
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thank you
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
A most beneficially received version of what it feels like to be a committed soldier. No other way could be represented to effectively reveal the undying conviction honorably held among the brotherhood of comrades in arms.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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A most beneficially received version of what it feels like to be a committed soldier. No other way could be represented to effectively reveal the undying conviction honorably held among the brotherhood of comrades in arms.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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thank you
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yes.
Comment from RKagan
So true, this poem is. It is a lovely tribute to the soliders. This close to Veterans Day , it is a good time to take notice of all that the military does for us.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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So true, this poem is. It is a lovely tribute to the soliders. This close to Veterans Day , it is a good time to take notice of all that the military does for us.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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thanks RK
Comment from miajaffri
A nice tribute to the veterans, brothers in arms.
Unfortunately, there will always be wars and you say this
...we fade away until the next generation is called upon
for duty.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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A nice tribute to the veterans, brothers in arms.
Unfortunately, there will always be wars and you say this
...we fade away until the next generation is called upon
for duty.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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thank you
Comment from Alan K Pease
I don't think we ever forget the dead for war makes enemies for itself and patriotism is not the only way we share grief, but the way we can express our own responsibilities for the situations that lead to it.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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I don't think we ever forget the dead for war makes enemies for itself and patriotism is not the only way we share grief, but the way we can express our own responsibilities for the situations that lead to it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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thanks
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written and an excellent tribute to those who served. Some paid the ultimate price. Your poem expresses the sentiments of all. Good job.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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This is very well written and an excellent tribute to those who served. Some paid the ultimate price. Your poem expresses the sentiments of all. Good job.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome, Gary. Charlie
Comment from Magics02
Just a fine piece of art here on this day Veterans Day. I loved the image your words provoked in my soul and want to tell you that this is great. Blessings to you and all our soldiers.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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Just a fine piece of art here on this day Veterans Day. I loved the image your words provoked in my soul and want to tell you that this is great. Blessings to you and all our soldiers.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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thank you
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You are so welcome poet:)
Comment from Majicman
This poem supports your other ones in message and beauty. It's Remembrance Day in Canada and I'm enjoying reading your poems about the people who made this place free to live. Thanks.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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This poem supports your other ones in message and beauty. It's Remembrance Day in Canada and I'm enjoying reading your poems about the people who made this place free to live. Thanks.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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thank you
Comment from Cedar
Very well said on this Veterans Day. So many paid
the ultimate price fighting to make this world a better place to live and in my opinion we always will. It's
just mankinds nature to be constantly at war with each other.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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Very well said on this Veterans Day. So many paid
the ultimate price fighting to make this world a better place to live and in my opinion we always will. It's
just mankinds nature to be constantly at war with each other.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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thank you
Comment from parisaboyd
I loved this So many have given their lives for our freedom, over centuries,we must not forget we must give thanks and homage to our soldiers, Thank you for writing such a strong piece
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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I loved this So many have given their lives for our freedom, over centuries,we must not forget we must give thanks and homage to our soldiers, Thank you for writing such a strong piece
Comment Written 10-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2010
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thank you for reading