Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "As I wander through time and space"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from poetbear
Just beautiful. It made me cry.
Lost my Dad when I was 15.
Just lost my mother-in-law this January.
This is moving and incredibly well wriotten.
Many will relate.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Just beautiful. It made me cry.
Lost my Dad when I was 15.
Just lost my mother-in-law this January.
This is moving and incredibly well wriotten.
Many will relate.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thank you for reading
Comment from livelylinda
deepwater: your writing is deep and full, not a timid bit of fancy, but with muscles bulging! I'm a new fan because I want to see what's next. livelylinda
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deepwater: your writing is deep and full, not a timid bit of fancy, but with muscles bulging! I'm a new fan because I want to see what's next. livelylinda
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
I love it, it is so beautiful, we all have those memories of our parents or grandparents who have passed on. The part of life we have to endure the pain of loss.
Well written.
Mary
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I love it, it is so beautiful, we all have those memories of our parents or grandparents who have passed on. The part of life we have to endure the pain of loss.
Well written.
Mary
Comment Written 14-Jun-2014
Comment from Valkarie
Another wonderful poem about family members that excels and has a great visual and concise merit. Your writing is so good and inspiring with a good balance and flows in the right direction which is so adequate. An emotional poem very creative and full of emotional wording that capture the moment. Good write, again.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Another wonderful poem about family members that excels and has a great visual and concise merit. Your writing is so good and inspiring with a good balance and flows in the right direction which is so adequate. An emotional poem very creative and full of emotional wording that capture the moment. Good write, again.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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thank you Valkarie for your review and the comments Gary
Comment from Black-Saphire
Oh this was beautiful! Good job, this was a great read. From the first line to the last I enjoyed every word. :) If i had to choose, my favorite lines were:
I think of both from time to time,
Knowing we'll be together again some day,
Remembering little things in life
We cherished along the way,
Great job, and keep up the amazing work!
-Jade
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Oh this was beautiful! Good job, this was a great read. From the first line to the last I enjoyed every word. :) If i had to choose, my favorite lines were:
I think of both from time to time,
Knowing we'll be together again some day,
Remembering little things in life
We cherished along the way,
Great job, and keep up the amazing work!
-Jade
Comment Written 02-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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thank you Jade for your welcome comments and review Gary
Comment from InHisownwrite
Boy, how many of us have been here....
Yet, you wrote it down for us..... I too, miss my mom and gram.... I was lucky enough to have very good ones like you.. the good things about someone never die... It lives on in our hearts... That's what this says to me.... Bryan
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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Boy, how many of us have been here....
Yet, you wrote it down for us..... I too, miss my mom and gram.... I was lucky enough to have very good ones like you.. the good things about someone never die... It lives on in our hearts... That's what this says to me.... Bryan
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you Bryan for the comments and review
Comment from Max Edon
I must admit that I wiped away a little tear as I read this. My Grandmother is gone,but I am lucky enough to still have my mom. This was a great poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I must admit that I wiped away a little tear as I read this. My Grandmother is gone,but I am lucky enough to still have my mom. This was a great poem.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you for reading Max
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You are welcome!
Comment from Auroraboreal800
What a beautiful ode to your mother! The hope of knowing we will be together again makes life livable. Your poem touches my heart very deeply.
Thanks for sharing, I really liked it!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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What a beautiful ode to your mother! The hope of knowing we will be together again makes life livable. Your poem touches my heart very deeply.
Thanks for sharing, I really liked it!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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your most welcome
Comment from wierdgrace
I am putting together a book of my inlaws live oin Germany and America, as well in Paris and Norway, well done, and I felt emotions, well written, no errors
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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I am putting together a book of my inlaws live oin Germany and America, as well in Paris and Norway, well done, and I felt emotions, well written, no errors
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thank you wierdgrace for your review, I have england norway france and america
Comment from gargoyle socks
This is beautiful and very touching. It is hard when we lose loved ones. Their memory lives with us forever. I like the last two lines of your poem. Nice work.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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This is beautiful and very touching. It is hard when we lose loved ones. Their memory lives with us forever. I like the last two lines of your poem. Nice work.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2010
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thanks again sorrow