Comment from Judian James

Excellent

I do not like this form as you know and I have no idea if rhyming is allowed and I could care less BECAUSE I love what you have done with this short form. Stunning visually and a delightful mood is created in the reading
Thank you. Excellent

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010

Boy, this is wonderful, if you don't like the form, but my poem anyway, what a neat compliment! I am thrilled! Thank you Jude! Your opinion means a lot to me!! ") Wow. Susan

Comment from Fireshadow

Excellent

Susan, another great creation from your wonderful prolific mind. This double tetractys is absolutely beautiful in its imagery. I could almost feel the wind as I soared over the mountain and lea. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Amarillys

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010

Hi there! Thank you!! I sure wish I could fly like this! Literally. I can't even "fly" in my own life, but great to dream!! Thank you Amaryllis! HUGS! Susan

Comment from anne1204

Excellent

Very well done I loved the picture What is a "mountain lea" is it a tree? Good job with the rhyme and flow of the lines. Anne 1204

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010

Hi Anne! A lea is another word for meadow! I found it while looking for another word one time! It's kind of different, so I think it's neat to use! Thank you for yet another truly appreciated review Anne! You're the best! ") Susan

Comment from katz meow

Excellent

This is such a wonderfully beautiful double reverse Tetractys, inspired by the mountains. The syllable count is perfect, as is the sentiment of the poem. This is an excellent write...katz meow

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010

Thank you Miss Meow!! What a wonderful review! I am thrilled you liked this one! I love the west, and sure would love to be an eagle for a day to fly over the mountains, unafraid...wow. Thank you very much!! ") Susan

reply by katz meow on 03-Sep-2010

Susan, I live on the Mississippi River and we have Bald Eagles here hunting fish all the time. It's an awesome sight never taken for granted. Katz

Comment from LOA7

Excellent

Excellent! Great poem. I could actually smell the air and feel the freedom. I live in Montana, and I get the privelage of seeing the Bridger Mountains everywhere I go. That mountain range lifts my spirits every time. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2010

Oh wow! I would love to live out west!! What a great place Montana! I wrote a poem about your state! "Remembering Montana" if you have time, go back in my portfolio and read it! I was there as a child, and have loved it since! I would move there if I could. To ride my horse and be able to see a mountain, I would just be in heaven. Thank you for a wonderful review Loa! I'm sure glad you enjoyed this! ") Susan

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Realist101:

to soar like an eagle would be
a wonderful thing, wouldn't it?
I loved everything about your
tetractys -- good luck in the
contest -- this should be a
strong contender

love,
jan

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010

Hi there ! ") Gee, thank you, yes! I would like to try an ultralite thing someday, but I would probably chicken out! But oooo, it would be great to fly!! Yes, and thank you for a great review! I am happy to hear from you!! ") Happy Labor Day!! Susan

Comment from Ted T

Excellent

Hi :)

Another good one today. Quite positive and it has a pleasant universal message.

I enjoy this kind of work more than "The Sayer of Sadness."

Ted

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010

") I know you do Ted. I do think about you each and every time I get down. It helps me to write "out" my pain. I sure don't want to bring you or others down. Life is handing me melted chocolates right now, and it is hard. I love hearing from you tho, regardless of rating. I appreciate you. Susan

reply by Ted T on 02-Sep-2010

Okay, you're doing great. Keep it up.

Ted

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Susan,

I just love this wild and free double tetractys poem/entry!
Just superb! Your form is excellent and it leaves your
readers feeling exhilarated!

OK...

"come soar away into wild ecstasy
gliding with grace
fly away
with me
free"

It makes for a fantastic entry,

Linda
Linda

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010

Hi Linda! Thank you! I'm happy you liked this! What a neat picture I found! I sure hope it's right, I never know with structured rules like this! ") Great to hear from you Sweet!! Love, Susan

Comment from stanjo56

Excellent

Why thank you Susan for dedicating this to me i'm flattered and quite honored too, I saw my first Bald Eagle not far from my house last summer, we have some around here, I like your poem and the picture is beautiful, makes me want to jump right in there and hike along the mountain, well written you are great thanks for sharing!!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010

I hear they are here too, but we see the golden eagles mostly? Lucky you! I hope you can get a good picture of one sometime! And I am happy you liked my poem! I want to live out there maybe. Take care!! Happy photo hunting Stanjo! Susan

Comment from leesm

Excellent

Hi Susan. I don't like the tetractys form. Most seem to be disjointed and flow unevenly. Your tetractys is a lovely exception. The lines break in a meaningful and understanding way, flowing nicely, each building on the one before, all leading to a lovely conclusion. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
-Lee

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2010

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2010

Hi Lee! Thank you! What a great compliment! This makes my day! Don't forget you can vote too in these contests even if you don't join it! I don't think many know that! Thank you for being a kind reviewer!! Susan