Sories Poetically Speaking
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Bozo"A complete story in written as a poem.
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Comment from Bellringer
This is a truly heartwarming poem. Well crafted with consistent rhyme. It shares the bond that can exist between a pet and human family. Pets like Bozo are very special family members and create great memories.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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This is a truly heartwarming poem. Well crafted with consistent rhyme. It shares the bond that can exist between a pet and human family. Pets like Bozo are very special family members and create great memories.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you Hector, I really appreciate your review and nice oomments.
Beth
Comment from WRITER1
This is a wonderful story in a poem. Sometimes one has to wonder what God has in story for us. This pet sounds like an angel. I know he is in gods care.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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This is a wonderful story in a poem. Sometimes one has to wonder what God has in story for us. This pet sounds like an angel. I know he is in gods care.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and the comments. I believe God answered a need I had at the time.
Beth
Comment from tango494
What a well written, thought out and creative poem. Your words and talent in this work are of a high quality. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in your writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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What a well written, thought out and creative poem. Your words and talent in this work are of a high quality. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in your writing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you for the review and nice comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comments on this.
Beth
Comment from tango494
What a well written, thought out and creative poem. Your words and talent in this work are of a high quality. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in your writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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What a well written, thought out and creative poem. Your words and talent in this work are of a high quality. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in your writing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Somehow this got sent to be twice. I'll say thank you again so I can clear the board.
Beth
Comment from bhogg
Hi Beth - your poem was recommended to me by Nancy Wagner. I'm glad she sent me your way. I lost my German Shepherd, Abbey about 3 years ago. I don't think a day goes by when I don't think about her. They are magnifcent animals. Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Hi Beth - your poem was recommended to me by Nancy Wagner. I'm glad she sent me your way. I lost my German Shepherd, Abbey about 3 years ago. I don't think a day goes by when I don't think about her. They are magnifcent animals. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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Thank you Bill, I appreciate you stopping by. I'll have to thank Nancy for that. They are wonderful animals.
Beth
Comment from patmedium
What a wonderful tale of a wonderful four footed friend! Beth, it's really nice to be home again in fanstoryland where I can read and share such marvellous work. Pat. xxx
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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What a wonderful tale of a wonderful four footed friend! Beth, it's really nice to be home again in fanstoryland where I can read and share such marvellous work. Pat. xxx
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Pat is is good to have you back. I miss you went I don't see you name. Thanks for the wonderful review stars and the nice comments.
Beth
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Well, I'm here, dear ... and you're stuck with me now! LOL. xxx
Comment from mumsyone
Beautiful poem about a beautiful! This dog looks a lot like one that came to our house several years ago, looking for shelter after it had been in a fight with coyotes. We searched for the owner but found none. I named him Samson. He was a fantastic dog!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Beautiful poem about a beautiful! This dog looks a lot like one that came to our house several years ago, looking for shelter after it had been in a fight with coyotes. We searched for the owner but found none. I named him Samson. He was a fantastic dog!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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This isn't Bozo but it looks so much like him it could be. I've had other German Shepherd since but never another like Bozo. Thank you so much for the reveid and the comments.
Betj
Comment from MizKat
Beth - I love your poem about the dog who could have been a guardian angel. It is sweet and sad, but also full of joy. I really liked it. Kat
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Beth - I love your poem about the dog who could have been a guardian angel. It is sweet and sad, but also full of joy. I really liked it. Kat
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you Kat, I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for the lovely review and the stars.
Beth
Comment from N.K. Wagner
No sixes left to give you, but you deserve an entire galaxy for this, Beth. You've written this poem beautifully and simply as your Guardian Angel deserves. (Who says angels have to look like men? Would you allow a strange man near your little girl these days?) :] Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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No sixes left to give you, but you deserve an entire galaxy for this, Beth. You've written this poem beautifully and simply as your Guardian Angel deserves. (Who says angels have to look like men? Would you allow a strange man near your little girl these days?) :] Nancy
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you Nancy for the review and the lovely comments. You have a good point. In this case a dog worked better to protect me than a man would have.
Beth
Comment from humpwhistle
A slightly different take on pets from my cat story.
Nice rhymes and a constant rhythm. Isn't it odd how pets can just appear and disappear.
It does seem to be a little supernatural sometimes.
I remember an old TV show called The Littlest Hobo, about a German Shepherd and his episodic adventures.
Goood story. Lee
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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A slightly different take on pets from my cat story.
Nice rhymes and a constant rhythm. Isn't it odd how pets can just appear and disappear.
It does seem to be a little supernatural sometimes.
I remember an old TV show called The Littlest Hobo, about a German Shepherd and his episodic adventures.
Goood story. Lee
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you Lee. It does seem supernatural sometimes. You know cats have nine lives. You could have buried that cat eight more times if he'd chosen to hang around.
Beth