Railroad
poem/song lyrics99 total reviews
Comment from nartoonla
I like this poem song and even though didn't have a tune the one I made up was quite good. And being a railroad fan this was a good piece of that I truly enjoyed. YIhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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I like this poem song and even though didn't have a tune the one I made up was quite good. And being a railroad fan this was a good piece of that I truly enjoyed. YIhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Ha ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from Diny
I could feel the mood of this piece and the pace was great- and the picture was fantastic!- I love the perspective of the graghic and the imagery you expressed so well with this verse WRite ON!- Diny
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2011
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I could feel the mood of this piece and the pace was great- and the picture was fantastic!- I love the perspective of the graghic and the imagery you expressed so well with this verse WRite ON!- Diny
Comment Written 14-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2011
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Thank you very much Diny.
Comment from ameen786
I'll bet the railroad have plenty of stories to tell, wonderful composition, got a melody to it and would definitely make a great song. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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I'll bet the railroad have plenty of stories to tell, wonderful composition, got a melody to it and would definitely make a great song. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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And thank you for reading.
Comment from gallivandog
Ah, fabulous C&W Lyrics and your author notes paint the picture perfectly, I get it...I wish I could hear it as a song, I hear a fiddle and a chugging train beat in the background, see you in Nashville.
Dave
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Ah, fabulous C&W Lyrics and your author notes paint the picture perfectly, I get it...I wish I could hear it as a song, I hear a fiddle and a chugging train beat in the background, see you in Nashville.
Dave
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you Dave.
Comment from Galadriel's Lyric
Nice song! It moves as swiflty and easily as the train of which it speaks. Simple yet profound, easy on the ears and on the mind. Nice job here.
~Kristie Jo
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Nice song! It moves as swiflty and easily as the train of which it speaks. Simple yet profound, easy on the ears and on the mind. Nice job here.
~Kristie Jo
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Just as ur review was easy on my ego. Thank you.
Comment from closetpoetjester
Can I take a ride?
This was a wonderful poem Vic.
Had a soft sing song kind of meander to it and I heard a tune as I read.
Verrrrry nice.
It DID whisper on the wind I felt and I liked the clever wording in the beginning about the humble wood carrying the load of the heavy steel train.
Most enjoyable.
So where do I get a ticket? LOL
Closet
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Can I take a ride?
This was a wonderful poem Vic.
Had a soft sing song kind of meander to it and I heard a tune as I read.
Verrrrry nice.
It DID whisper on the wind I felt and I liked the clever wording in the beginning about the humble wood carrying the load of the heavy steel train.
Most enjoyable.
So where do I get a ticket? LOL
Closet
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Hi Closet. That was a very nice review, thank you. How are things?
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Always a pleasure Vic.
I have had better weeks.
Thanks
Closet x
Hope your doin okay.
I've missed you.
x
Comment from mermaids
This is definately a song and I love the feeling your words convey as I read this. The railroads are such a part of our history and this poem emphasizes the spiritual part they play in our lives. Wild asparagus sounds awesome!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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This is definately a song and I love the feeling your words convey as I read this. The railroads are such a part of our history and this poem emphasizes the spiritual part they play in our lives. Wild asparagus sounds awesome!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Yes, my parents loved it. I love it now. But when I was a kid I just picked it for them. You know kid's tastes for veggies! lol
Comment from Judian James
Hi there D! It's been ages. I hope all is well. I liked this very much and could easily hear it as a song. I did think this one bit was a little weak:
"Used your ditches
to sleep a while.
Come on railroad
stay a while." I don't think I would have repeated " a while" here. Otherwise, excellent. It was good to read something from your pen today.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Hi there D! It's been ages. I hope all is well. I liked this very much and could easily hear it as a song. I did think this one bit was a little weak:
"Used your ditches
to sleep a while.
Come on railroad
stay a while." I don't think I would have repeated " a while" here. Otherwise, excellent. It was good to read something from your pen today.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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I kind of agree. U don't miss much do you? I have contemplated changing it several times, but... We'll see. Thanks for reviewing.
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I would want the same sort of review from you please. I hope I didn't offend.
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No problem.
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the change is great
Comment from WRITER1
When I was a child I used to walk the tracks too. I loved to do it and you really could go for miles and not see another person. Those were the days my friend.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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When I was a child I used to walk the tracks too. I loved to do it and you really could go for miles and not see another person. Those were the days my friend.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Yes they were. Or else we remember them a little romantically, eh?
Comment from SUSKI
This poem does just what you wanted it to do. It paints a picture for me. I love the rails too in other ways. I love riding them and I love listening to them. We've always lived where we could hear the trains.
Great job.
SUSKI
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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This poem does just what you wanted it to do. It paints a picture for me. I love the rails too in other ways. I love riding them and I love listening to them. We've always lived where we could hear the trains.
Great job.
SUSKI
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you. Cogitator or Cognitator? Or just 'tater? lol