Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Part two, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
Hotlanta! Now that's what I'm talkin about. Finally this girl is grabbing for her future and hopefully someone real to share it with. Please let this be the spark to allow her sensual side to blossom.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Hotlanta! Now that's what I'm talkin about. Finally this girl is grabbing for her future and hopefully someone real to share it with. Please let this be the spark to allow her sensual side to blossom.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from forestport12
Impressed at how uncluttered your chapters are. You don't waste a preposition, and your dialogue is often crisp, conceivable and to the point as most are. Very important message too and worth reading. Stan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Impressed at how uncluttered your chapters are. You don't waste a preposition, and your dialogue is often crisp, conceivable and to the point as most are. Very important message too and worth reading. Stan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janice65
I realize I have not read any of this novel until now. This is my first reading and I found it very 'there', as if I am watching a movie. The story flows well and seems to move along as it should. However, you need to get into something exciting or a hint as to what is going to happen soon. Is this a love story/novel? I hope it turns out well for this couple and Michael. Good writing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I realize I have not read any of this novel until now. This is my first reading and I found it very 'there', as if I am watching a movie. The story flows well and seems to move along as it should. However, you need to get into something exciting or a hint as to what is going to happen soon. Is this a love story/novel? I hope it turns out well for this couple and Michael. Good writing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. It is a romance novel, but this novel highlights the problem of spousal abuse,
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write with good imagery and needs no edit.H I Barbara, there is not much I can say about your story only I love it. perhaps BY READING YOUR WORK SOME OF YOUR SKILLS WILL COME MY WAY.lol. Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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A good write with good imagery and needs no edit.H I Barbara, there is not much I can say about your story only I love it. perhaps BY READING YOUR WORK SOME OF YOUR SKILLS WILL COME MY WAY.lol. Mary
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gooloom
Domestic abuse are the new dirty words of this century. As we evolve, we are supposed to start being decent and gentle human beings. But the opposite has happened. Abusive relationships, whether of a husband and wife or parents with wild children,are becoming regular features inthe media these days. There is so much of impatience, intolerance rampant in our society that its frightening! You have brought out the sinister aspect in your story very well. What happens next? I wait to hear more of it! well written and you are indeed talented. Keep writing. gooloom
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Domestic abuse are the new dirty words of this century. As we evolve, we are supposed to start being decent and gentle human beings. But the opposite has happened. Abusive relationships, whether of a husband and wife or parents with wild children,are becoming regular features inthe media these days. There is so much of impatience, intolerance rampant in our society that its frightening! You have brought out the sinister aspect in your story very well. What happens next? I wait to hear more of it! well written and you are indeed talented. Keep writing. gooloom
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
So good to see Anna and Troy spending time together. Since I've missed so much I wonder if this is their first kiss, it seems it could be. The muffler made me as nervous as it did Anna, I see Bobby is still harassing her, that can't be good.
Connie
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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So good to see Anna and Troy spending time together. Since I've missed so much I wonder if this is their first kiss, it seems it could be. The muffler made me as nervous as it did Anna, I see Bobby is still harassing her, that can't be good.
Connie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Life seems to have settled down for Troy and Anna. They seem quite comfortable with each other. He seems to like Michael like a son.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Life seems to have settled down for Troy and Anna. They seem quite comfortable with each other. He seems to like Michael like a son.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
I should have known that if old Troy wans't going to make the first move, then Anna was going to have to get things going. Barbara - you do a marvelous job of getting your reader engaged and in the middle of the story. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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I should have known that if old Troy wans't going to make the first move, then Anna was going to have to get things going. Barbara - you do a marvelous job of getting your reader engaged and in the middle of the story. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 18-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, I just love these two as always. They seem to have such a nice easy relationship. Your dialog and interaction between them is lovely as always... and loved the ending and her wanting that kiss. Looking forward to more.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Barbara, I just love these two as always. They seem to have such a nice easy relationship. Your dialog and interaction between them is lovely as always... and loved the ending and her wanting that kiss. Looking forward to more.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Thnk you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You're absolutely right that it takes time, Barbara. And there's backsliding and readjusting and inordinate caution. You're capturing it perfectly. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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You're absolutely right that it takes time, Barbara. And there's backsliding and readjusting and inordinate caution. You're capturing it perfectly. :) Nancy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.