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I Wish I Was Never Born

Six Word Lifestory

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Comment from Ukulele Indian
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What a clever idea! It takes a very creative mind to be able to express such a unique and original thought in only six words... there's irony and even a touch of humor, which is exactly the type of story I enjoy. Amazing job.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you Ukulele Indian. I forgot about this life story. I appreciate your visit & wonderful comments.

    Patricia
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the poem. If a rat could think, I think it would not have wanted to carry a plaque. It wiped out most of the human population. Of course, it did leave a lot more room for rats. Great work.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012
    Good point, Ellie Jean. I appreciate your feedback.

    Patricia
Comment from Cheryl Baker
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It is amazing how a story can be written in just six well chosen words. It is not a nice tale but you have done a great job. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Thank you Cheryl.
Comment from yndemand
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Poor rat I could see if that was a human how that would really make you depressed. Powerful six little words, that are full of a big meaning, Good job

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Thank you Yndemand.
Comment from c_lucas
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Sometimes we do not always succeed in our endeavors. Even when the results are negative, we still have a chance to succeed. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
    Thank you C.
reply by c_lucas on 09-Feb-2012
    You're welcome.
Comment from janalma
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You have said a lot with this really neat set of phrases. Just those six words brings up a whole plethora of images. Not especially pleasant ones, tho! Good six word entry.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2012

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
    Thank you Janalma.
Comment from Bobbi22
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This is a great six word poem. You said so much in so few words. The artwork was perfect for this as well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
    thank you Right Pics.
Comment from Krugerrand
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LOL! Ah, the little ole life of an insignificant rodent. What a great perspective you present.

Well done! Best of luck!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
    Thank you Krugerrand.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello samandlancelot
your 6 word poem shook me a bit. I must say your picture adds the sorry devastion of the cause of the plague,
A vwey original six word life story.
Gert

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Thank you Gert.
Comment from Carolyn 12
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EWWWW. Certainly a short story that raps up a whole life
into six words, says it all. Best wishes in the contest. This sounds like a winner to me,

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Thank you Carolyn.