Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Vanity Solutions"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from Purple Lily
That's so good. Such a great sense of humour! Maybe I'll have to try this out -I mean, standing on my head. Thanks so much for sharing this great little poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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That's so good. Such a great sense of humour! Maybe I'll have to try this out -I mean, standing on my head. Thanks so much for sharing this great little poem.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much! to be honest, i havent tried myself, im too old. ha. Thanks for the nice review!!
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form and pairs well with the illustration
I like the alliteration in snapshots standing and the visual you create, which is very funny :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 form and pairs well with the illustration
I like the alliteration in snapshots standing and the visual you create, which is very funny :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review!!
Comment from PoetSpirit
So funny and refreshing! LoL Very well written and presented! I guess we all have felt that way at one time or another! Best wishes, Emily
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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So funny and refreshing! LoL Very well written and presented! I guess we all have felt that way at one time or another! Best wishes, Emily
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much Emily, for your kind and thoughtful review!!
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You're very welcome! :o)
Comment from Poetic, Just Is.
Boy, do I relate to THIS one, or what?!
At nearly 50 (in a few weeks), I can totally relate to this! As I had my toddler saying, when she was about 2, and from then on.... "Gravity is not my friend"... LOL... And Spandex either! :-(
This is adorable, and the art is a perfect match! Did you write one for the other? I love them both!
Well done!
Cat
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Boy, do I relate to THIS one, or what?!
At nearly 50 (in a few weeks), I can totally relate to this! As I had my toddler saying, when she was about 2, and from then on.... "Gravity is not my friend"... LOL... And Spandex either! :-(
This is adorable, and the art is a perfect match! Did you write one for the other? I love them both!
Well done!
Cat
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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I turned 50 in october so this poem came to me with ease! Spandex: the enemy! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, it is so much fun to hear from those who can really relate!! Thank you!
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--Jesus Christ! What a humorous picture artwork. Haha!
--Excellent 5-7-5 syllabic format.
--"gravity set in"
Good metaphor for aging/fat physical changes.
--Good, funny poem here.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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--Jesus Christ! What a humorous picture artwork. Haha!
--Excellent 5-7-5 syllabic format.
--"gravity set in"
Good metaphor for aging/fat physical changes.
--Good, funny poem here.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your fun and interesting review! Glad you liked it!!
Comment from patsypats
The picture you chose is absolutely hilarious. I think there are many that can relate to this statement and it's nice to know we can actually find humor in it. Thanks for the laughs.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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The picture you chose is absolutely hilarious. I think there are many that can relate to this statement and it's nice to know we can actually find humor in it. Thanks for the laughs.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much! Glad you got a laugh!!
Comment from TSPoet
Very interesting
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Enjoy the slight scottish humor of this type write with this kind of art, very kool
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hope to see more and thank you so much for sharing
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Very interesting
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Enjoy the slight scottish humor of this type write with this kind of art, very kool
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hope to see more and thank you so much for sharing
Comment Written 02-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your feedback and interview!!
Comment from Anisa-
Haha. Lol. Good thinking! Very funy little 5-7-5 you have written here. Syllable count is spot-on. Great job. Cute picture to go with it.
Anisa
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Haha. Lol. Good thinking! Very funy little 5-7-5 you have written here. Syllable count is spot-on. Great job. Cute picture to go with it.
Anisa
Comment Written 02-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much Anisa, for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from TammyGail
Haha :) that's the funniest thing
I've read today :) poor thing
She's in need of a lift times 3
:) thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Haha :) that's the funniest thing
I've read today :) poor thing
She's in need of a lift times 3
:) thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 02-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for this cute and funny review and for your kind words!!
Comment from c_lucas
Aging is never very much fun. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Aging is never very much fun. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you very much, for your kind and generous review!
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You're welcome.