Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "part three, Chapter 20"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
71 total reviews
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Okay, I needed that release. At least you aren't totally heartless, lol. But will Anna really make a full recovery? I'm thinking of the emotional scars this whole drama must have left on her. Guess I'll soon find out.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Okay, I needed that release. At least you aren't totally heartless, lol. But will Anna really make a full recovery? I'm thinking of the emotional scars this whole drama must have left on her. Guess I'll soon find out.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thank you.
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
Medical science sure doesn't know everything, that's for sure. I wonder how many times a child's voice has brought a coma patient back? Interesting question.
Roberta
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Medical science sure doesn't know everything, that's for sure. I wonder how many times a child's voice has brought a coma patient back? Interesting question.
Roberta
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I don't know, but accordign to my research and a number of my fans fairly often.
Comment from abbasjoy
The bonding is indeed strong between mother and son,plus Troy's and his parent's love are helping to pull Anna through, and I do feel as though she will have a full recovery.
The dialogue flows well and the interaction between the characters is very natural, which helps to draw in the reader.
Well done.
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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The bonding is indeed strong between mother and son,plus Troy's and his parent's love are helping to pull Anna through, and I do feel as though she will have a full recovery.
The dialogue flows well and the interaction between the characters is very natural, which helps to draw in the reader.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 31-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I am sorry you had to read this without the bonus points.
Comment from whispering fox
THIS WAS A VERY EXCEPTIONAL STORY!IT JUST NEEDS A PINCH OF MORE CLARITY.FOR ITS BODY AND PLOT IS GREAT. THE CHARACTERS ARE VERY CARING AND BELIEVABLE AND YOUR DESCRIPTIONS IN THE STORY ARE PLEASING TO THE READER.THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER INCLUDES A SWEET MIRACLE AS WELL!AWESOME JOB.
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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THIS WAS A VERY EXCEPTIONAL STORY!IT JUST NEEDS A PINCH OF MORE CLARITY.FOR ITS BODY AND PLOT IS GREAT. THE CHARACTERS ARE VERY CARING AND BELIEVABLE AND YOUR DESCRIPTIONS IN THE STORY ARE PLEASING TO THE READER.THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER INCLUDES A SWEET MIRACLE AS WELL!AWESOME JOB.
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate your support.
Comment from bob cullen
I've not read any of your work for quite a while. Nothing has changed, you writing is superb. Your characters are well defined and retain their credibility.
The story too moves along at a pace that ensure the readers interest is maintained. You really are one of the better writers on this site
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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I've not read any of your work for quite a while. Nothing has changed, you writing is superb. Your characters are well defined and retain their credibility.
The story too moves along at a pace that ensure the readers interest is maintained. You really are one of the better writers on this site
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Barbara - good to see you getting towards a conclusion with your great story - I have been away for a while, so have missed a few chapters, but have peeked back.
Good luck with drawing it to a close.
Steve
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Barbara - good to see you getting towards a conclusion with your great story - I have been away for a while, so have missed a few chapters, but have peeked back.
Good luck with drawing it to a close.
Steve
Comment Written 24-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jclark
Another touching and moving chapter. Your writing style is very down to earth and the characters are easy to relate to. You handle conflict and love perfectly and with just enough intensity to make it intriguing.
Judy
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Another touching and moving chapter. Your writing style is very down to earth and the characters are easy to relate to. You handle conflict and love perfectly and with just enough intensity to make it intriguing.
Judy
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 24-May-2012
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Thank you for kind review and support.
Comment from Tegan1311
This is the only chapter I've read, so I'm not sure what happened before this. The dialogue is good and I'm what happened before this was very tragic. There really is nothing like a mother's bond with her child :)
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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This is the only chapter I've read, so I'm not sure what happened before this. The dialogue is good and I'm what happened before this was very tragic. There really is nothing like a mother's bond with her child :)
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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I am not sure what I need to improve to get five stars. Please tell me so I can make those improvements.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Another strong work Barbara. The power between Anna and Michael potent in this post.
Very well penned and hooked me wanting more when I got to the end.
Enjoyed this one:) Great flowing work...
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Another strong work Barbara. The power between Anna and Michael potent in this post.
Very well penned and hooked me wanting more when I got to the end.
Enjoyed this one:) Great flowing work...
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Connie P
You're keeping me on the edge of my seat, hoping that she'll wake up permanently, but in the land of fiction who knows. Exceptional job, Barbara.
Connie
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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You're keeping me on the edge of my seat, hoping that she'll wake up permanently, but in the land of fiction who knows. Exceptional job, Barbara.
Connie
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.