Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "part two, Chapter 22"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
Oh this was a beautiful chapter. It tied up the loose ends nicely, and still gave us a happily to come ending. I love how Anna told off her father, he needed to be backed up. Yet I feel her real family Troy, Paul, Betty, Margaret, and Everett are all Anna and Michael need. When the crap hit the fan, they were the ones who put themselves on the line for them. This was an excellent read. Thanks for allowing me to indulge.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Oh this was a beautiful chapter. It tied up the loose ends nicely, and still gave us a happily to come ending. I love how Anna told off her father, he needed to be backed up. Yet I feel her real family Troy, Paul, Betty, Margaret, and Everett are all Anna and Michael need. When the crap hit the fan, they were the ones who put themselves on the line for them. This was an excellent read. Thanks for allowing me to indulge.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2012
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Thank you for following the entire story.
Comment from Kingsland
This piece has excellent dialog in it. I had the feeling of a family being together and all of the positives and negative you put into this has a reality in a real life situation. This was excellently written and I was very entertained reading it... John
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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This piece has excellent dialog in it. I had the feeling of a family being together and all of the positives and negative you put into this has a reality in a real life situation. This was excellently written and I was very entertained reading it... John
Comment Written 12-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anthony Crosbie
Hi Barbara. I've read a couple of your earlier chapters and I have to say this is very well written indeed. Your dialog is very natural and your descriptions make the story come alive in my head. Archie
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Hi Barbara. I've read a couple of your earlier chapters and I have to say this is very well written indeed. Your dialog is very natural and your descriptions make the story come alive in my head. Archie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Solacium Mariae
I think I read an earlier chapter. But this chapter is so wonderfully written. You did a fantastic job. Truly, a fantastic job. If only I had another star...
It's just excellent. I can't even specify what it is, but I'll try. For one thing, the tension between the characters. And the resolution has a little bit of an aww, but it's not too much.
I think what did it for me was the relationship between Anna and her dad. It reminded me of myself with my daddy. I do call him daddy, and we've had similar type conversations (not abuse)
Great end!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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I think I read an earlier chapter. But this chapter is so wonderfully written. You did a fantastic job. Truly, a fantastic job. If only I had another star...
It's just excellent. I can't even specify what it is, but I'll try. For one thing, the tension between the characters. And the resolution has a little bit of an aww, but it's not too much.
I think what did it for me was the relationship between Anna and her dad. It reminded me of myself with my daddy. I do call him daddy, and we've had similar type conversations (not abuse)
Great end!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thank you for your insight and kind review.
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Comment from turtledove
barbara.wilkey, love your approach and inspiration. You go girl! I wish more people would read this....I love your use of show and tell. Something I am working on. all the best, turtledove.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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barbara.wilkey, love your approach and inspiration. You go girl! I wish more people would read this....I love your use of show and tell. Something I am working on. all the best, turtledove.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
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You're Welcome! td
Comment from Readywriter52
It is easy to see why Anna stayed so long with Bobby. She didn't have the support of her parents. Parents she should have been abled to depend on when Bobby got violent. I'm happy to see that her father understood this in the end.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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It is easy to see why Anna stayed so long with Bobby. She didn't have the support of her parents. Parents she should have been abled to depend on when Bobby got violent. I'm happy to see that her father understood this in the end.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emmaysavage
Great ending. Worth waiting for. I like the way Anna has grown in this book. I was glad you didn't make the scene with Abner too gentle and easy.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Great ending. Worth waiting for. I like the way Anna has grown in this book. I was glad you didn't make the scene with Abner too gentle and easy.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from babyross
This was such a touching write. I did read a page from an earlier post and enjoyed it as well. I think you have a great novel here. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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This was such a touching write. I did read a page from an earlier post and enjoyed it as well. I think you have a great novel here. Best of luck!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MizKat
Barbara - This is a beautiful ending post to your novel. You are a wonderful writer and know how to keep the reader's attention. I look forward to your new novel. Kat
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Barbara - This is a beautiful ending post to your novel. You are a wonderful writer and know how to keep the reader's attention. I look forward to your new novel. Kat
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
A very nice ending to your very nice book. I have enjoyed it all the way and hope to see more of your writing soon. I have always enjoyed the sight of Indian Blanket's covering a field in the spring. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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A very nice ending to your very nice book. I have enjoyed it all the way and hope to see more of your writing soon. I have always enjoyed the sight of Indian Blanket's covering a field in the spring. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 11-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your love of the Indian Blankets